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  1. I'm curious as to how Betsy justifies Abe's actions being non-consensual while hers aren't. Leona did make her objections obvious the first time they veered off-script. Was there a 'you have to use the diaper for everything' clause in the contract that she didn't read? Even the pacifier wasn't really an excuse - in BDSM, if someone's gagged and can't talk, you have to have a signal that substitutes for a spoken safeword. I feel that a professional would know that.

    I still enjoyed reading the story --- I just want to know how she rationalizes things. She's the character whose thoughts we've seen the least of, so that makes her a mystery... like what @Wannatripbaby said.

  2. On 11/27/2018 at 7:02 PM, Selpharia said:

    and too weak of a sense of fashion to mke theivery of that kind worthwhile.

    Going to a lot of effort to steal an ugly sweater or a tacky pair of tights is the best thing, though.

    Related: Do Voidwalkers have a sense of fashion, and how good/bad is it?

    On 11/27/2018 at 7:02 PM, Selpharia said:

    As someone who has little sisters, they somehow know how to push all your buttons. But I don't think she'd want to become a villain, it would make her so unhappy. She'd lose out on everyone being proud of her, and everyone wants to feel appreciated and valuable. She does, I think, honestly want to do good. Even if it's reasonable to think Sami's being a bit self-centered here, she is trying very hard. 

    So either no one's told her about the shady aspects of Vector, or she's so angry that she doesn't believe it.

    I wonder how she would respond if she ever figured out that her little sister has powers.

  3. 21 hours ago, Selpharia said:

    <<That’s hardly a punishment; what you’ve described is standard practicing procedure. I’d initially considered the results of her mistake consequence enough, but I have been rather lenient recently. >>

    Nonono, your first idea was fine, space-mommy! Practice is great! I sure do love practice!

    <<I believe a standard human punishment would involve my little one spending an allotment of time considering the error of her ways, while located near one of the vertices of the room to prevent distraction?>> Yes, that will do nicely.

    You want me to sit in the corner? Really?

    <<Oh no, princess. There’s no sense wasting a good opportunity for exercising your powers. Floating in that corner of the ceiling for about fifteen minutes should suffice.>>

    But I...This is only going to get worse for me, isn’t it?

    <<Indeed.>>

     

    I witch-cackled. Good luck, Bridgett!

    Oh, and I haven't been able to comment on every story update when they happen because I've been tired lately, but I liked them all nonetheless. 

  4. On 10/11/2018 at 6:52 PM, Selpharia said:

    Well, given the amount of shady stuff Vector does, it certainly seems like the kind of place other heroes should investigate. I wonder why the Stalwart Six and other official hero teams haven't done that? ;)

    I was tired and misread the second to last chapter and thought based on this that the new hero would in fact be a fake hero hired by Vector to investigate them and report back to the world at large that there's nothing there. In which case, it'd be a good thing that Bridget almost ate her! ...Maybe? Okay, probably not. If she's dead, there's no proof that she's a fake hero and Bridget is stuck with the guilt of killing someone who might be innocent.

    I'm curious as to how Val is going to handle Bridget's mistake after this is over. And how they're going to defeat Mi'cha... though I have a suspicion that there's a good reason she didn't show off her flying skills before. Maybe it'll attract too much attention? (Attention that will hopefully not lead to a bunch of heros trying to break into the main building where the Warmistress is, which seems like it'll lead to a lot of dead people.) 

    Hey Val,
    Couldn't Bridget just... spit that energy back into Tenkai? Like how wolves will regurgitate food for their puppies! It's still good, right??
    I'm sorry for this mental image. It came to mind and I had to do it.

  5. I've told two of them about it. One was fine with it, and another was concerned that any partner who I got involved with might be a pedophile looking for a replacement to the real thing. I wasn't really sure how to refute that except to explain that it can be a domination thing.

    In general, I got the feeling that the second one was uncomfortable with it.

  6. Be warned: Amazon does have rules about non-con and family relations. Even if it has no sex in the story, if your ABDL story features their family in it, they consider that incest and will ban you.

    Edit: I also think that messing will get you into trouble, and possibly wetting. I'm not 100% sure about that last one, but I have a feeling it would.
    Smashwords and Excitica don't have those restrictions, as far as I'm aware, but research that first before uploading anything.

  7. On 9/5/2018 at 5:57 PM, Selpharia said:

    This is such a great question, thank you so much for asking it! I think you’re very correct that it’s “all of the above.” I don’t know if Val herself could figure out how much of each it is, and it’s definitely changed as she and Bridget spend more time together. I’d just add one more: Val likes being in charge, being important, and being needed. I dare say she has grown to enjoy the experience of being space mommy for its own sake. It’s a little funny, really. Val originally wanted to manipulate Bridget into being submissive, because she’s used to the Voidwalker interpretation of submission: pure obedience. But when she started doing that, she opened herself up to a dominant role that went further and was more fulfilling than the mere command she expected. She became, and continues to become, a caretaker.

    Kudos also for picking up on the importance of Echo in opening Val up to the role of space-mommy. 

    Regarding the last part of your question: we see Bridget’s dream version of this scene, so it’s very possible that Bridget was by this point starting to see the commanding, dominant, self-confident  Val as a bit of a mommy figure, and her subconscious was just trying to explain it to her. Val definitely did have some mommy traits before she was intentional about it!

    Thank you again for reading so closely and carefully!

    I happened to read your story when I was having a bad day and it made me feel better. That's why.
    That, and I like figuring out why people do things, and that includes characters.

  8. Hi! I really like your story.

    After reading the whole thing, I wondered why Val was interested in encouraging Bridget to to embrace her Little side. Manipulation? A means to an end, in getting Bridget to use her abilities? Echo's influence and affection for flesh creatures? Genuine affection after hanging out in Bridget's head for so long? All of the above?

    But, also, I re-read the first few chapters again and noticed something else:

    (I am unfamiliar with this forum interface and I can't figure out how to elegantly quote anything without dealing with huge posts, so I'm going to use a cruder method.)

    ----
    The pain kept coming, wave after wave after wave, and soon she lost all sense of time. In the few moments between the pulses of agony, she looked at her pale skin and received a renewed dose of terror. The veins beneath her arm had begun to glow purple, as though the blood they contained had been replaced by some horrible ichor.

    As the shock of the sight overcame her pumping adrenaline, Bridget stopped struggling, and went limp, her body alternately wracked by pain and helpless sobbing. If she'd had the ability to produce sound, the only thing that anyone would have heard was a tiny, mewling cry, the sound of a terrified, defeated child.

    “Please...I want my mommy”
    -----

    And a few moments later:

    -----
    But as she did, she felt a strange chill course through her body, and an unfamiliar finger touched her lips, gently but irresistibly shushing her.

    Bridget craned her neck to try to look up at the head of the operating table and found herself gazing up at an upside down version of herself. 

    Well, almost herself. Bridget had never, even in her goth phase, been a fan of all black or all that much leather, and her hair was certainly not a neon red. But the soft oval of her face was exactly the same down to the identical dimple in her chin and mole on the left side of her face, The girl's grey eyes were  identical to Bridget's, and they had the same skinny frame.

    As Bridget looked up at her doppelganger, it spoke, and its voice too was like hers, except that it reverberated with an unearthly echo.

    “It is done. With this, little flesh-thing, you and I shall both have exactly what we desire.”
    ----

    Given that you've said that they don't have the concept of the childhood, was it just that Val was already acting as what she thought a mother should be, she just wasn't aware of how that differed for humans until Bridget demonstrated it?

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