This is my first comment. Awesome story! i think You are a very good writer. I've only seen very minor tech edits needed ( I'm a professional line by line editor). The characters are all intriguing, and I'm totally hooked! I'm newby to AB/DL and just discovered the bliss of wearing last month. OMG it's heavenly ! I am sub baby girl to my DD, who is new to DD/bg, but taking to it like fish to water. I was hiding my diaper play while he was at work, and read him a couple early chapters, & he said, " I'm now thinking about getting diapers for you" YAY!! so I admitted I had "tried" one & liked it. So thank you for helping me broach the subject with your fantastic story! Today I'm assigned with buying diapers for myself!!!!
Also, I loved the SMUT chapter, it's really milder than I imagined and just the right amount of "spicey" imo. No reason imo to leave it out of full text. I personally want more graphics, and sex along with this wonderful plot. and I have only read this far! Just moved, & My unpacking has slowed as I keep taking breaks to read another chapter! lol Glad I still have 7 more to catch up.
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