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diapernocturnus
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I just read all of this so far in one siting and its great. Thanks for writing a great story
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Okay assuming the journal contents haven't changed like everything else, things are about to get very interesting.
I can't wait for the next chapter
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Another great story back, Thanks for a great chapter. I can't wait for the next part
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Its great to see this back, and what a hot chapter to come back with
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12 minutes ago, Lavellan said:
And most likely not. These recent chapters tend to take me a full week to write. Plus, I have a few other engagements this week that will keep me busy. So the next chapter most likely won't come out til next week at some point.
Ah, I figured the last chapter was done/nearly done, take your time I'm sure it will be worth the wait. ☺️
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52 minutes ago, Lavellan said:
A/N: The next chapter will be the last in the main section of this story. But fear not, I have plenty of ideas left for small spin off tales between Derek and Jordan!
Nooooo, It cant be so near the end already. But in all seriousness This whole story has been fantastic, thank you for writing it.
P.S. will this last chapter be out before New Years?
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Its a nice continuation, please continue
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I'm still intrested in more, but I wouldn't want to force you into continuing if you aren't feeling it. If your other idea is more fluid at the moment I say go with that. People will still read which ever you choose.
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48 minutes ago, SolSombraYSoldados said:
At the VERY least Briana is in some serious trouble with her Mom.
At the worst...Briana has a good family that will have her back, so we won't think about that unless it happens!
Very scary times for a Little Girl though.
Okay I kinda "accidently" cheated and read ahead (Your website as awsome BTW). I can't belive that we aren't even halfway through yet.
Thank you this is such a great story. Its so well written I have't read a story this well written and detailed for a very long time it is up there with the greats of ABDL long form stories like Little Luzy, Who Is Mommy Violet, and Finding Jill
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I've got a feeling someing bad is going to happen next
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Looks like Briana has a new mummy in her future, soo good, I can't wait for more, thank you
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looking forward to it, thank you
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Great story and i'm looking forwards to more.
Though what i'm guessing is a typo through my brain in a loop for a moment should that be "Mary asked" not Melissa asked
On 6/17/2022 at 10:16 PM, DLJeff52 said:“I would like to see Melissa…um, Missy…and just check in with her. Is it ok if I swing by later this morning?” Melissa asked, knowing that if she could see Melissa she would be able to tell just how “comfortable” she was interacting with people that had just one day ago been strangers.“
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This is great, is there going to be more? Its so cute. I'm imagining Sam being the little brother about 3-4 years and Jackson being the older brother 5-6 who pretends he is older than he actually is, and is afraid of being a baby as he thinks of himself as a 'big-boy' as he has a baby brother, but is still jealous of his little brother. Its such a fun dynamic. Its like Jackson is age-playing while age-playing
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That was soooo frigin cute, I cant wait for more. Thank you
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A great start and it is difficult to tell that English is not your first language. I have read stuff from native speakers/writers that is alot worse.
Keep it up and I look forwards to see where it goes.
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Good luck and a speedy recovery too
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Its a great start I'm looking forward to reading more
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It is fantastic to see this back and what a delightfully humiliating chaper to come back with, thanks for a great new chapter
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Are email notifications working atm? As i've not had any new post notifications for any of the posts I am following, since the end of Feb (I have checked my spam and trash and nothing there) and there has been at least one new post on a thread I'm following, that I have not recived any notifications for. Also possibly related for a few weeks before I stopped getting them google (gmail) was flagging them as it couldn't be sure they were coming from the dailydiapers.com domain (the yellow "Be careful with this message" banner) So just thought I'd check if other people are having this as well.
Many thanks
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Count me in for more this seems so nice and warm it would be a shame not to continue
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This is a fantastic story and it feels much more warm and real than some of the other stories I’ve read (which are great too, don't get me wrong). I don't know if it because I’m a fellow Brit (apologies if you are N.I, I use the term fellow Brit in the nicest way possible) and I can associate with the characters better as to me least it feels like its set in the North, as it feels very close to home which is lovely or if it something else but whatever it is keep it up. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Many thanks and your work is very much appreciated
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18 hours ago, Nomadic said:
I’m really hoping to have the next chapter up before I leave on vacation on Friday. If not, it’ll be mid-next week. In another thread @WBDaddy (I think it was you) talked about text to speech to proof stories. I did that, and realized that I have about 7 hours of audio to review. Most of the chapters take about 20-30 minutes to read. I probably should have broken part 15 into two chapters, I was well over my targeted 5,000 word limitation per chapter. Sorry about that. I hope you’re all enjoying it thus far, we’re about halfway through the story.
You have nothing to be sorry for its a great chapter and i'm (and i'm sure other are as well) looking forward to the next one whenever you can get it posted whether its Friday or next week. Don't stress over a hobby, we can wait. ?
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5 minutes ago, StoneRiver76 said:
Yes, well, Mariela is more like the child they can't have, I sort of think. I had planned on making it more maid-like in the beginning, but now that plan seems... well, wrong.
As you write them more you will get to know your characters better so things will start to feel like things they would or wouldn't do, and therefore your ideas may have to change its a sign you are growing as a writer and being able to empathise with your characters is important to make them feel 'real'.
As for giving you feedback, I’ll try to be as helpful as I can. I always feel bad critiquing work people do for free as I would rather read 1000 bad stories than drive 1 potential author away with unwanted advice/feedback
As for the maid story I would suggest you try start a notepad/word doc/ google doc/ etc with ideas/characters/plotlines for your stories and when you have an idea for the maid story or other stories (kinky or not) note it down as you will forget the idea later but you will remember having had an idea which, take it from me is really really annoying.
I personally use short summaries of my ideas using "and then" such as: "Young looking homeless lady has an accident in a shop and then gets rescued by a couple and then becomes their 8y daughter" or "Boy living with relatives finds out he is a wizard and then goes to magic school and then fights evil" as these are the germ of the story and from here you can grow it and expand it as you go.
I currently have a story file with half a dozen or so sentences of brief story plots/outlines, I really should do something with (along with a handful of half written stories I haven't gotten round to finishing), and having an organised list of ideas is great when you are stuck as you can refer to it and it may spark an idea or two and in amateur writing one thing, I found is that there are no 'bad' ideas. So, while the maid idea doesn't work here who's to say Steven & Susan don't have a friend who has an age play maid or some other kind of kinky maid
To Zero and Back [Updated with chapter 50]
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its great to see this back it's one of my favourites