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    Athena

    in Story and Art Forum

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    I'm curious to know what exactly are the motives of the villains. Why are they doing all this, what's the benefits?        

    I liked the story so far, it got a very interesting plot, and you can almost touch the tense atmosphere as the main character gradually realise there's something very, very wrong going on. Very well done.

    The whole unbirth of characters who are still adults isn't quite my favorite - always has me perplexed about the mother's body capacity to do that XD - but it's not due to you as a commissioned author, and to each their own after all. Thanks to your commissioner for sharing it! I really expected him to be Groblek, by the way, considering the plot. ^^

    Anyways, so far it's a fantastic read once again, Personalias! And it's quite interesting to see you try very different themes, with Unbirth and Horror here. I've been a real fan of your stories with ABDL mixed with a reality change or *fantastique* setting, even though I'm more a fan of AR than ABDL, and I'm really looking forward getting the chance to commission you as well one day. :]

     

    Keep the amazing work! ;)

     

     

       

     

     

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    Reunion (One-Shot)

    in Story and Art Forum

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    The gender neutral thing was a nice touch for sure. What really sold me, though, was the narration of, as you said, "a character who had already lost, and didn't realize it or care" and moreover the interaction with one who hadn't, leading to both of them misunderstanding each other.  

    These sort of "you were so close!" situation are very neat, and somewhat difficult to properly set up. Again, great work !

    The Struggle

    in Story and Art Forum

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    No problem. On the other end of the spectrum, I tend to overuse smileys myself because with english not being my first language it happened to me before that I ended up sounding rude when not intending to.      

     

    Silly internet not connecting our brainwaves for automatic mutual comprehension yet. 

    The Struggle

    in Story and Art Forum

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    Neat plot.  His "struggles" really made for a fun read.     

     

    I'm pretty curious about this artificial intelligence robot, though. Maybe it's my thirst for plan going awry and backfiring speaking, but I can really see it somehow cause Jam-Jam to share these sweet growing struggles along Jack-Jack. :P

    It's Not A Competition.

    in Story and Art Forum

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    Thanks you for posting these stories here too after a while. ;) Some orobably wouldn't bother. 

    Fun is the good word here. The banter between the friends in the beginning was well written in that way. Felt very lifely as well, like an actual conversation rather than made up sentences. 

    Of Leopards And Their Spots (Cowritten with Personalias. Repost)

    in Story and Art Forum

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    Everyone can run, but not everyone can run like Usain Bolt. 

    I've written stories before, and I will probably attempt to write again someday to finish them, or try to start some new ones to leave unfinished, but reading them won't make me as satisfied as when I read the works of talented authors out there

    Which is fine. Most people can't run at a high end professional speed, but it doesn't mean they can't enjoy watching the olympics.

     

    It was just a joke, anyway. Cloning require way too much paperwork nowadays. Plus my wallet already got a big enough hole with the world cup coming home. :P

     

     

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