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So awesome to come back here after a long time and see this amazing story completed. Thank you LittleMatt, it has been an amazing read all along. Perfect from beginning to end!

Great start! I hope we will get to see more. :]

Thanks for the great read!

Great to know! :]

You mean just as a 5$ patreon? Big if true

I wish I could commission you one of those. Crossing fingers for some open slot on your Patreon. :]

Great little story. Definitiely one of your best of that size.

His stated age is quite a stretch to the suspension of incredulity. I think you would have been better off making him six. Otherwise, it's a well written story. I'm looking forward reading more of it. :]

I'm curious to know what exactly are the motives of the villains. Why are they doing all this, what's the benefits? I liked the story so far, it got a very interesting plot, and you can almost touch the tense atmosphere as the main character gradually realise there's something very, very wrong going on. Very well done. The whole unbirth of characters who are still adults isn't quite my favorite - always has me perplexed about the mother's body capacity to do that XD - but it's not due to you as a commissioned author, and to each their own after all. Thanks to your commissioner for sharing it! I really expected him to be Groblek, by the way, considering the plot. ^^ Anyways, so far it's a fantastic read once again, Personalias! And it's quite interesting to see you try very different themes, with Unbirth and Horror here. I've been a real fan of your stories with ABDL mixed with a reality change or *fantastique* setting, even though I'm more a fan of AR than ABDL, and I'm really looking forward getting the chance to commission you as well one day. :] Keep the amazing work!

The gender neutral thing was a nice touch for sure. What really sold me, though, was the narration of, as you said, "a character who had already lost, and didn't realize it or care" and moreover the interaction with one who hadn't, leading to both of them misunderstanding each other. These sort of "you were so close!" situation are very neat, and somewhat difficult to properly set up. Again, great work !

XD Joke aside, never change. You're perfect the way you are.

Loved this one. The quiproquo are hilarious, and the final communication failure is deliciously dark.

I sure would love to see some actual physical Age Regression in one of your stories one day.

A truly awesome read from first chapter to the last. Thanks for sharing your neat works!

Thanks for the info.

You're too humble. Do you know if he's doing well, by the way? It's been a while since I've read of him.

And it's as great on a second read than when first read way back then! It feel like a long time since I've seen you, Personalias. Are things going well on your end? I sure hope so.

Well summarized.

No problem. On the other end of the spectrum, I tend to overuse smileys myself because with english not being my first language it happened to me before that I ended up sounding rude when not intending to. Silly internet not connecting our brainwaves for automatic mutual comprehension yet.

I wasn't asking for one either! Just letting my imagination go wild here. I'm eager to see these following struggles you mention, anyways. See you then.

Neat plot. His "struggles" really made for a fun read. I'm pretty curious about this artificial intelligence robot, though. Maybe it's my thirst for plan going awry and backfiring speaking, but I can really see it somehow cause Jam-Jam to share these sweet growing struggles along Jack-Jack.

Thanks you for posting these stories here too after a while. Some orobably wouldn't bother. Fun is the good word here. The banter between the friends in the beginning was well written in that way. Felt very lifely as well, like an actual conversation rather than made up sentences.

Well, "Better late than never".

A very good read once again. I don't recall having ever read it before, so it's a nice surprise.

Everyone can run, but not everyone can run like Usain Bolt. I've written stories before, and I will probably attempt to write again someday to finish them, or try to start some new ones to leave unfinished, but reading them won't make me as satisfied as when I read the works of talented authors out there Which is fine. Most people can't run at a high end professional speed, but it doesn't mean they can't enjoy watching the olympics. It was just a joke, anyway. Cloning require way too much paperwork nowadays. Plus my wallet already got a big enough hole with the world cup coming home.