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Little Lamb

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  1. The way you write prose and build characters are really well thought out. And in scenes like this last one it really shows. The tension and anxiety are oozing from the text, as well as the care and confort present. Loved the twist with the cage, and how it's working for a more healthy and caring relationship. Also, some of the exposition dialogue in these last few chapters feels funny/weird to me. But as I'm not a native english speaker, it could be that, or related to it at least. Julia's turning out to be an interesting character too, can’t wait for the next day...
  2. Really loving the disabilty representation. Kinda cruel with poor Ella, but oh so real... As a disabled trans little, it's so heartwarming to see actual nuance in disabled characters here. The other options are so overdone... Makes me wonder if there's anymore disabled characters in the cast, and if we will even know about them at all. Though as most eggs, "Noah" gives some autistic vibes, but maybe that's just me projecting...
  3. Loving every update. The affection, kindness and love between sarah and mike is so tangible and cute it becomes disgustingly sweet. (The 2nd best kind of sweet IMO) Also, given characterization so far, I wonder if Julia's really interested in being a mommy or actually into having one... Not at all clear if she herself even gets it. Although, chapters will tell. Thanks so much for so many updates and such awesome work.
  4. This setup is so heartwarming. Cozy as diapers. And hot too. Your climax build-up is very well written. Anxious to see where this will go
  5. Another chapter, another round of cracks on the egg... Hope when they come out it isnt as painful as the usual experiences
  6. Got to read this one very far ahead on legitfic. It's very well paced and as grounded as the trope can be. The genie's give and take makes for some awesome drama while still doing some very heavy Lifting at the many complicated parts of the plot. Im really loving tô read it. Cant wait for more
  7. She's clearly up to something, maybe even in the know of the whole charade... I really like the pacing, and together with the inner turmoil in him make everything feel more grounded.
  8. The parts not being told outloud make me anxious in a good way for every chapter drop...
  9. Simply regulate time exposure. Problem solved. No it's not?! The US has a whole problem with healthcare, but lots of other places don't. E.G. most western european countries, Brazil, Japan... And even if it was, which isn't for like almost half the planet, the reality of Trans afirmative care in the UK is much worse than some long ass lines... Not only there, but around the whole world, trans people are institutionally targeted as "problems" and our lives are made miserable in every little possible aspect, just for being ourselves. Please do some actual research and look into other's realities besides yours before spouting nonsense in public. Yep, kinda the point of what THEY are going through, not many people try damn stupid suicide so young, specially in rich countries. Please refer to my previous paragraph... Sometimes that's the point of fiction, sometimes it'll be adressed later. Kinda early for critiquing the most cliché setup on the site??? I completely disagree with the very hard part of making someone go missing, not easy sure, but not for the reasons you stated. Specially with their "target audience" For the rest Yeah, it creeps everyone out... again, kinda the point of the show, please have some popcorn...
  10. Insert here transphobia warning... (also the story happens in TERF Island, as far as I know.) Can't answer for everyone of us, but that definition isn’t very inclusive for most trans people. Very easy to work around with some special-made light-bulbs. (UV-A with white light I think) I heard about regression as a form of therapy for trauma once or twice, have no idea if it's legit, but within the trans demographic severe traumatic experiences are a dime a dozen... That's for sure, not exactly about what you said, but she's surely painting a much more optimistic and pretty picture than What's probably reality. Still unsure if they already know about the MC actual gender... Hope it goes well anyway.
  11. Dr. Joy ~ pkmn's nurse Joy... I think. The rest will probs be spoilers, even if I'm wrong. I really don’t know how to explain it in a non-disruptive way for anyone else... If some wise and caring grown-up could teach this little silly sheep how to... (if there even is a way, that is)
  12. The way Dr. Joy (saw what you did there...) and Ceres talked, to and about "Him" makes me think we've got an egg clocked right from the start...
  13. Nice premise, the execution is also very well done. Hope it keeps going
  14. Really nice start. As always, keeping up with your works is a blast. Hoping the obvious cat gets out of the proverbial bag soon enough. Things usually dont work well with that much repression going on...
  15. Just passing through to say I've loved this one verily much, like, a whole whole lot. Stories with this kind of reversal always get to me. And that you write very well and it shows so much and it's awesome. I specially loved the way you handle character voice, and I'll be sure to look around for your future works. Thanks so much for this Christmas story/present.
  16. I could see some abdl stuff going on with david from his early thoughts and coments. But even if there's nothing of the sort there, this one is a real gem. The way the characters get lost in their own fantasy selves, and the conflict arising from just this bit of roleplay but actually not, is really great. And the way you go about it, mixing their voices as the thoughts flow around... Just getting to read it is a damn awesome Christmas present.
  17. It's a perfect parody and a great example of christmas romcoms. Really, you’re one of the Best writers around here. Hope to be just like you when I grow up!
  18. Only got to read the baby bet very recently, loved every word of it. As a very weird human being myself, it was refreshing and touching to read something closer to my reality than most of the common fiction around. I also wanted to say that your work has been a delight to read. Can't wait for further developments on the wasters' household.
  19. Yep, Trigger Warnings. Some of Emily's and Pamela's behaviour, as well as a few scenes and circunstances Alicia's submited to that hit just close enough to trigger a traumatic response from this one sheep here. And I'd guess Im not the only one. Im still loving the story as a whole. Just concerned about safe enviroments of kink exploration. Will sure do, thanks so much for being open to commentary and criticism. Again, I'm loving the setup, Alicia's psyche really is phenomenal to explore. And even though it's not the same, as a disabled person, I'm feeling more than seen by the representation and feel of her day-to-day struggles.
  20. Emily gives me the creeps... guess the road to hell's really paved with the best intentions. Still, great read so far, just a suggestion though, a little TW here and there on some chapters would be really awesome.
  21. Definitely some magical stuff going on...
  22. After a saga or two I finally got to reading this gem of a story. It's so perfect the clearly conflicted way Daphne portrays her adventures with Mary. Kept me always wanting for more and more for a few months. Really loved it till now. Cant wait for more...
  23. This last chapter Was such a banger. Your work on the craft really shows, and it's just... WOW, Damn effing wow... Much eager for more, cant wait for What's coming next
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