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This is what I totally expected and urgently feared. And, as Guilend noted, you've eliminated pretty much all of the normal ways Littles get out of this kind of mess in these stories. I feel like I did upon first reading LFP's tale ("Thief in Service," I think) where one little was kidnapped and sold into babyhood on a private island...but as least that one had him monitored by others who knew he was missing from the jump. And that was not even a DD tale! Here? I believe that the littles will be saved, but I have no clue how.
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On 9/9/2023 at 12:15 PM, Back to Babyhood said:
Audrey has spoken with your Mum and they both agree that it would be best if you wore some form of protection at night and when you’re out of the house. There’s no judgement from her or the boys. They just want the best for you and don’t want you getting embarrassed, if you have an accident or getting worried if you’re not able to make it to the toilet in time.”
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Looking up, he met Audrey's compassionate gaze, her smile conveying both understanding and a hint of assurance.
Have I missed something somewhere? These two quotations from the last two chapters show clearly that Audrey is being considerate of Will's feelings. And then this public display???? What happened?
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14 hours ago, LostBBoyBear said:
As the pumpkin splatted on the ground though, Patrick just gulped and prayed that his landing and ending in all this wouldn’t end with a splat as well.
What an excellent ending to a thoroughly enjoyable and well-written chapter!
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Another fun chapter. OK, though: I have a few long-gestating issues.
- Connor suspects that there is something in the sleep pod messing with him. Why does he continue using it without complaint? Why not have Amanda or Fred look into it?
- Why doesn't anyone call out the university on the absurdly early bedtimes? First, it's a group punishment, which shouldn't even be legal. Second, the university claims that it is paving the way for more littles to graduate, so how can it ignore something that so blatantly reduces their chances by eliminating a lot of study time?
- Mackenzie confuses me: she cossets him—that is clear—but she also seems to respect him as a person; yet she goes along with whatever is happening here with seemingly no issues.
BTW: I'm another one who can't imagine that Connor's "temporary" nanite adjustments might not be all that temporary..
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Of course, I expected more of Redge. I was just wistfully thinking I'd like this more if you could find a way not to give in to that particular temptation. Still, Redge is the epitome of evil, so I suppose there was no way around it.
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14 hours ago, Elfy said:
floppy sea spiders
!! 🤣 I love this. I also love this enclosure; too often
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On 10/23/2023 at 7:44 AM, AnActualAirbender said:
Can we just forget about Redge? I mean, Patrick has had enough drama, right? Can we get a couple chapters of him learning how to let himself be little and the warm and fun moments that creates for the Bigs who care for him?
Honestly, I agree. Although I have fully expected Redge to engage with Patrick again, it would be a nice change if his efforts were abortive and he was caught and incarcerated because of them...without re-endangering Patrick.
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I'm another reader hoping for the "fair" ending. I mean it was clear from the start that something like this was going to happen (especially when Bethany left the room). But this turn of events has gone way too far. (And how is the relationship between the sisters ever going to survive this? I can't imagine that there could be any possible way for Elizabeth to apologize enough for Ashley to accept her as a sister-in-law, which would make it difficult for Bethany to see her.)
I also do not think it would be realistic—she says, knowing how bizarre it is to apply that word in a case like this—for Bethany to have been in on it. You made it clear that there was real love between her and Ashley. How could she ever forgive her sister for defiling her girlfriend in such a horrific and at least partially permanent way?
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I agreed with Guilend: I love the relationship between Cat and Amanda. And I have to say that this is (I'm sure) the first time that I've read a story that paid as much attention to that dynamic as it did to Big and Little. Their relationship looks wonderfully "lived in"; I get such a sense of their past together. And I also love that you don't feel the need to explain every one of their personal in-jokes; it just makes all of this seem even more natural!
So far there has not been much drama re:Littles, but you make statements in your posts that suggest something is coming. For my part, though, I'd be perfectly happy to see more of what happens to two old friends as they settle into a new dynamic as mommies. 🙂
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Is the stuffy Honey Bear or Honey Paw?
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My first thought was that they might be going to a zoo...
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Although I am not at all fond of Sarah's mother, who is basically an abuser, I still must acknowledge that this is one of my favorite stories. I'm glad it's back.
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This is starting out quite nicely. 🙂
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I'm quite confused about the start of this chapter. At the end of the previous one, Patrick had settled down after unloading at a group session. It seems to me, unless I am totally missing something—always a possibility—that the second scene here should have been first?
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Another very strong chapter. (Less traumatizing this time.) I can't help thinking that Redge might yet menace Patrick; why else would he have escaped custody?
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12 hours ago, SashaButters said:
She was proud of Matilda’s willingness to take therapy seriously and work on their issues. And there were issues. They hadn’t just jumped into each other's arms and lived happily ever after. Happily Ever After took work and communication, something neither of them were very good at.
And here we have the entire raison d'etre for this story. 🙂
It's nice to read chapters of this story that focus on primarily comical situations (sorry, Jennifer) instead of horror.
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This was one of the most intense chapters I've read recently from any story, and Redge is among the most twisted and evil bigs I've yet encountered. I sincerely hope this is the last time we see him directly...and that we hear secondhand of his permanent downfall. (Wondering too whether Halgen might have noticed something in the parking area; Redge didn't seem very happy that she wanted to talk to him.) Anyway, the stakes for Patrick have just gotten much higher.
Speaking of Patrick, you should be aware that there are several times when you use his name and mean Redge. Most of them, I think, are clustered near each other, but there is at least one toward the end as well. This is the are in the story where I noticed most of them:
On 10/4/2023 at 2:14 PM, LostBBoyBear said:“Now, hush,” Patrick commanded firmly as he slightly swatted Patrick’s thigh.
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What is Haven getting out of this? It travels across the galaxy just to find a host who will allow it to act out its kinkiest, most disgusting desires? To what end? And how does a weird black ooze from outer space get a messy diaper fetish in the first place?
Inquiring minds want to know. 🙂
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1 hour ago, LostBBoyBear said:
gambit
FYI: The spelling you want here is "gamut." I'm definitely enjoying this one so far.
1 hour ago, LostBBoyBear said:Floor 42
As soon as they went here, my first thought was, "Don't Panic." 🤣
1 hour ago, LostBBoyBear said:shuttered
I think this probably should be "shuddered," but maybe you mean something else?
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Nice to see this back.
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This story has been nothing short of wonderful. I'm sad that it is ending, but I have no idea what more the magic could possibly do to poor Nicole. For Vanessa's sake, though, I hope it shrinks her. She'd be much easier both to deal with and explain if she were actually baby-sized.
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I like your writing style here except for one thing: the constant switching of POV is very confusing. I could not follow it at all for quite a while and then, after I understood what was happening, it still felt awkward. Maybe write it just from one POV? (His.)
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This is so cute!
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Fun. I'm thinking "good girl" is another trigger.
Little Misunderstanding diaper dimension story
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I'm starting to think this section of the story is being written as present to Guilend.