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    Sam's Adjustment

    in Story and Art Forum

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    50 minutes ago, Elfy said:

    Well, Sam isn't a toddler. Just toddler-sized!

    I mean I understand that, but for all intents and purposes, it still means that her mother is treating a toddler-looking person in this horrific way.

    Sam's Adjustment

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    7 hours ago, Elfy said:

    “If you think I’m going to let a freeloader live here you’ve got another thing coming!”

    I realize the need to demonize the mom, but come on: I am trying to picture someone yelling something like this at an apparent toddle and I'm just unable.

    7 hours ago, Elfy said:

    She was supposed to get a good degree, get a good job and move to a nicer house and take her mother with her.

    Again, how is this at all reasonable given Sam's physicality and limits?

    7 hours ago, Elfy said:

    Now you’ll be sweeping floors at the local fast food place.

    Back to logic: who would hire a toddler to sweep floors?

    Sorry for harsh-ish responses. I just think that it's way too easy in a high-concept story to lose track of logic.

    Consequences of the Orange Mist: An Age Regression Virus Story (Chapter 26 - Complete)

    in Completed Stories

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    This is a really strong chapter, especially the conversation between Pete and his mother. I do have a couple of bones to pick, though:

    First of all, the people who run this place are not stupid. They know what Ian is. So why would they punish Pete for a pre-emptive strike against him? It's not like, at this age/size, he could really hurt Ian, and short of keeping the bully in isolation I don't see a way to prevent him from doing what seems to come naturally to him. Honestly, it does not make much sense.

    Further—and worse—is the attitude of the inspector. (Really? ARSED?) Whatever training he has received would have to include sensitivity to the emotional needs of children as they regress. There is simply no way that he would refer to them as "babies."

    k

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    Sally's Growth

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    23 hours ago, FlyingFox said:

    Three more chapters. I hope you enjoy it.

    Out of curiosity, why do you post three chapters at a time? I have to carve out a long block of space each time you post just to read it... Shorter postings, maybe more frequently—daily?—would be easier to handle.

    Hourglass Hollow - Chapter 10 Added (March 11, 2025)

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    Just caught up to this story and agree that it is wonderful. I'm wondering if the fantasy element might end up working differently from "The Ballet Slippers." Like maybe the hourglass will affect more than just Lillian...or maybe everyone involved will be aware of the magic as it works...or whether the inclusion of parent chapters might signal that they too will regress to an extent. In any case, I love the world building here; Seabrook is totally real.

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    Playing Doctor - Epilogue and Completed - 2-22-2025

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    I am not really a fan of stories that make the reader provide the ending even if that ending is pretty clear anyway. (I just watched a TV series that did the same thing: setting up an inevitable ending and then suddenly stopping before it could be realized. I had the same feeling then.) So...bottom line...I would rather have read the full moment rather than artificially stopping it midway there.

    Still, I loved this story...as I do all of your work.

    Convergence - Epilogue 02/10/2025 (Finished)

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    I won't deny that there were a lot of times when I felt confused about how things (even contiguous things) connected, but reading this story was like a liberation. Not only did you address (most often directly) many of the things about the DD that have always felt like fabricated ABDL wish fulfillment, but you were utterly unafraid of challenging your readers to keep up. And the epilogue feels like the perfect culmination of what this story has been doing from the start.

    This is going to go into my books as one of the best of the DD stories.

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    The Running Shoes (Ch. 66 - 7/8/2025)

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    In this case, it involves a pretty silly kidnap plot by criminals who would make the "Wet Bandits" from Home Alone look like geniuses. I know this is a diaper story with an impossible plot, but until this subplot you have strived at least to make it believable within itself. BUT nothing about this side plot plays as in any way realistic.

    Convergence - Epilogue 02/10/2025 (Finished)

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    I seem to be saying this a lot, but this is a wild and specific reinvention of the Diaper Dimension. DD2.0, maybe. It may be hard to follow at times, but it seems to be trying to resolve the many inconsistencies created by several decades of unfiltered additions to PPP's original world.

    I'm really enjoying this.

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    Convergence - Epilogue 02/10/2025 (Finished)

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    I like this story a lot even though it is all over the map plotwise. It seems to rewrite the relationships, settings, and pretty much everything with the start of each new chapter. That could drive me crazy but instead it intrigues me. I'm wondering if there is a master plotline that you are following. Every once in a while I see hints of one, but it never remains. How are you keeping all of this in balance?

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