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  1. I am another one of those people who glommed onto this story right at the beginning and continued to enjoy it all the way to the end. It's a thoroughly enjoyable piece of fiction whether or not the reader happens to be ABDL.

    Thank you for it, MW.

    I also enjoyed The Baby Once Again, and I'm about to procure All My Girlfriend's Rules. 🙂

  2. Wow. I somehow had fallen three chapters behind in this, one of my favorite stories! But now I am caught up and (of course) loving every page! One thing I really admire is the way that you allow the tension to settle down and remain in lull for extended periods...as it obviously would in real life...before suddenly erupting again. And you handle both so well. 🙂

  3. Just a theory, but I'm thinking that you have set up a denouement (still a bit down the road) in which Ian and Priscilla are the only "happily ever after" we'll see. Julia will warn her off, but we all know how well that sort of thing goes. And as for the Kink Squad, all three of them seem to want Ian in order to fulfill fantasies of their own, rather than true love. For a while now I've been of the opinion that Sarah is incredibly selfish and controlling, and she doesn't deserve him. Vickie seems to love him, but she is more into the kink as well. And Rita? I'd say she's just consumed by FOMO. All three want to control him: they'd take away his independence and ultimately make him into a different person who, though he would be the sperm donor for their babies, would be more likely to find himself in the nursery with them than out in the world as he has been. 

    His own inability to say no to a strong woman has led him toward a life in which he could be totally dominated by three of them, but I've seen no real tender feelings from him for anyone other than Priscilla. I think it is only with her that he has the chance to be happy.

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  4. At this point, I rather wish you had not allowed Darlene to succumb to the temptation to use hypnosis. There is something precious that is budding now, and maybe it would have happened anyway. (I think it easily might have.) but when/if he finds out about the hypnosis...well, all bets are off.

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  5. 16 hours ago, MinnesotaWriter said:

    It's obviously been a while since we've had a chapter with all of the friends. We will get to that, and their reactions, pretty soon.

    I like pretty much everything about the way this is wrapping up. However, I'm finding it hard to understand why her friends have not visited her in hospital. It makes no sense to me, especially for Lisa. She's been there more than a week and no communication at all?

  6. I'm very happy to read this. My one issue with the other one for most of its length was that Samantha and Chelsea behaved like bigs but were the same size as everyone else. (I still don't really get that, though maybe it was explained and I just don't recall?) Anyway, they are Big now, so problem solved. I do hope that Samantha's seeming nonchalance is justified though; it would be a shame to lose her as a character this abruptly.

  7. The way that you have narrated this story from the start, one eye on where it is going but the other firmly on how it will get there, suggested precisely what happened in this chapter. No way were we going to go quickly to a diagnosis; rather, we need to see her slowly emerging from the stupor she has been in since school restarted...and to a great extent long before that. Otherwise, nothing good can happen: Sarah needs to begin to process for herself all of the ugliness that her mother's insanity has foisted upon her. That same careful narrative structure is why we see this:

    2 minutes ago, spark said:

    they haven't tried to explain much of this to Sarah.  There has been a lot of talking at her, which is normal for her

    Sarah is not yet in any position to understand anything they might say even if they had a real clue what they were dealing with. That they don't is evident from their reactions. If Lisa or whoever brought them there told them about the abuse, she could not have known how bad it had gotten. She could not have known that her mother had broken her with all of this. It makes total sense, then, that the CPS people would assume she didn't really need diapers, etc. I do, however, assume that (no matter who reported it) they know that she is not normally the way she is currently coming across, and that they will immediately understand the depth of what her mom has done.

  8. 17 hours ago, MinnesotaWriter said:

    There are a lot of stories about people being forced back into diapers/babyhood, and I feel like there are a lot of times, especially when it's parents/kids like this story, where the protagonist accepts it too easily without it being portrayed as the traumatizing experience that it would be.

    Most of those stories lack any effort whatsoever of realism. Yes, Sarah's mother is a monster, but you carefully led us to understand what kind of monster she is, and it is clear here that she has fallen into her own delusion of what is "best" for her daughter. Sarah's breakdown, because we see it happen slowly, is entirely believable.

  9. Hi,

    Loving this new piece. I quickly subscribed to your subscribestar because of it, but I hate the fact that subscribestar doesn't (apparently) let you organize by story, creating a long list of chapters and messages to scroll through. So I am canceling that and have subscribed to ream instead. Either way, I do enjoy your work.

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