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Good to have an independent assessment of the condition of Ian’s backside! Good also to see at least some of the sorority showing an appreciation of genuine sisterhood too. I wonder whether anyone or anything can get Spats to follow a less antisocial path? I suppose he’s riding a tiger that’s hard to get down from, but you never know.
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Little Lady Briana (Ch19 - Little Love 4/25/2024)
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So sorry to hear that. I hope all goes well on Friday. Thank you for posting this, we can wait (or subscribe on Ream 😉) -
Hey Mike, Happy Birthday for yesterday! What a cliffhanger that last chapter is! But isn’t the chastity device Sarah bought a bit of an anachronism? I remember Altarboy’s website from the 90s and am fairly sure that until the “CB2000” cage device was launched, the only commercially available male chastity devices were hyper-expensive full belts, leather toys and a custom made device called Lori’s chastity tube, which I think needed a piercing. As for strange looking miniature brass locks, I think they were introduced about 10 years ago by the makers of the Holy Trainer. Having said that, your care with historical accuracy has been such that, if you remember otherwise, I’m sure you’re right.
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Yes, Google Translate is hopeless at this. The problem is that, in French, possessive adjectives (his, her) agree with the thing they describe, not the person the thing belongs or relates to. So both “his mother” and “her mother” are « sa mère » in French. Google has to guess whether to translate « sa » as “his” or “her” from the context.
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Little Lady Briana (Ch19 - Little Love 4/25/2024)
Bluebird67 replied to SolSombraYSoldados's topic in Story and Art Forum
OK, this chapter was well worth waiting for! Little Heroine Briana and another scene involving my favourite fictional babysitter: apart from getting the next chapter as soon as possible or even sooner, what more could one ask for? 😍 -
Little Lady Briana (Ch19 - Little Love 4/25/2024)
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I love these characters! I got stressed almost to @YourFNF levels reading LSB as you posted it and gave up just before Veronica started getting Melody to accept help, but I have started re-reading it now, as I want to get the back-story for LLB. Of course I’m now getting spoilers for the parts I’ve not yet got to, but it’s actually reassuring to read that Rosa lives with Briana and Melody now. Thank you for being a writer who reliably finishes their stories! -
Thank you for the new episode! Now for an introduction to English treasure law…
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It may be weird, but it’s well written. Thank you for posting it.
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Yes, their stories diverged from the point at which I made that comment. Having said that, they each reached a satisfying (to them and to the reader) resolution of their situation that reflected both their characters and their talents. Congratulations on skilfully executing another great concept!
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Another excellent chapter! Justine is an interesting character. It might be due to a rogue spellchecker, but you have “ascetic” (almost religious avoidance of luxury) where I think you mean “aesthetic” (style of beauty) in the description of the lift in the GF building.
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I’m seeing parallels here with “Chasing Emily”: protagonist is forced into a deal with a very well resourced adversary, but continues to follow her own agenda. Will Yayoi be able to use the resources provided through the deal in ways that Anna is unaware of? If this story follows that path, I will certainly enjoy it; if not, everyone likes surprises in the fiction they read.
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I like Anna, but I think that Yayoi will be making a mistake when she takes this deal. Being almost unknown leads to her adversaries underestimating her, to her great advantage. I am so glad to see another story by you here! I love your heroines.
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Parum Mortis - Epilogue(11/26/23)
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Another really cute, happy chapter ! -
Parum Mortis - Epilogue(11/26/23)
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One of your best chapters yet, I think! -
Sophie's adventures at New Beginnings (side story)
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I agree: A1 and B2- 41 replies
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Sophie's adventures at New Beginnings (side story)
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I don’t think antagonising her caretaker is a good idea. I vote C.- 41 replies
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Sophie's adventures at New Beginnings (side story)
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Likewise. Does Alea want to follow Charlotte’s path? If Sophie sees that she doesn’t, they should try to turn the tables on Claire. So, C first, then A.- 41 replies
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Sophie's adventures at New Beginnings (side story)
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B - because whatever she would see on the tour, she will probably experience anyway in due course.- 41 replies
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Well, that last crossword clue was easier for Brits, who say “H to O”, than for those of you who say “H through O”. I’ll have to look back at the others… Looking forward to the sequel!
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Maybe we should meet a teenager from our world who would like to experience life on the other side of the border. Perhaps they might have a development disorder that means they feel out of place here and might do better there.
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AB Sitter (New Story Posted 6/22/23)
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This story makes me feel so happy! Thank you very much indeed. I still wonder what Trish and Monchi will make of each other.