Bonsai

Nice, as usual. The best thing is that, while the direction is obvious, the details aren't. That makes it worth reading.

99% of the time I'm just a silent lurker , but this was too good and it would be ungrateful from me to just enjoy it without letting you know. Might inspiration strike on you soon again!

I'm wonderning where you want to go from here. Basically, this new add was a dosage increase of concepts and treatments already seen before. This remains extremely pleasant to read, thanks to your far better-than-average writing ability, but a plot twist of some kind would be nice...

He's submissive, but please don't make him be an idiot. Sooner or later he has to try a way to get some real sex from his wife. Could be interesting to see what happens if once in a while he takes the initiative and invites her in a cruise or in a Caribbean island village.

Revange, from now on, is best served served hot and mushy. I hope for Kirsten that the diapers are of a good brand.

Really good!

Don't really get why you used such title, but you seem a good writer and I will surely look for more.

Hmmm, yes. The ending probably wasn't the best part of this story, but for sure it remains one of the best things I've seen in a long while. Soo, a sequel or a prequel form a different point of view would be great.

This is getting better each rolling chapter. Caroline's POV was great, but now I wonder how Jasmine feels, while acting her reprisal.

Well written, original. Your descriptions in particular are good, not too broad but with all the right deatils to satisfy the reader. About sexuality, whatever you do, do it well. Go wherever you are confident to go and don't worry about anything else.

The two girls orgasming together while under a sort of torture gives a touch of humanity and is very romantic, in its own special way. Dialogues between Holmes and Williams on the contrary seem unrealistic. I don't know if this was intentional or not, the effect is sometimes comic, as for example, here:

Make her wear a thick diaper, a short skirt and a good pair of mittens she can't unlock. Then let her drink plenty of fluids and, if you wish, something to help her go #2. Then take her out by car and leave her at around 15 km from home, if possible in a commercial center or other crowded place. She will have her purse and her wallet with her, but no way to pay a taxi or buy a bus ticket. Should be interesting.

Good. I have to make a knot somewhere to remember to bump this up for Christmas

This story up to now was hot as hell, but without a too-deeply-developed plot. The last two chapters were a complete surprise, and are brilliant! There are unfortunately two main holes that you leave open: First Holms is certain that Mallory and Ellis (pus a third unknown) are plotting against Meridon and gives as proof the mail exchange. However, the content of the mails is completely omitted (apart the distracting detail that they are hot) and the reader is completely in the dark about the issue they are plotting about. Second: Holms plan to catch the "bad girls" is poor. Given the high knowledge those bad girls have of Meridon Security System, they knew from the beginning that the cloned bracelet they created would have been tracked. To keep the girls confident that their plot was not discovered, it would have been much smarter to fake an arrest & exemplar punishment of Warden herself. Then, another private office with a computer able to modify bracelets ID and priviledges had to be left open as a trap for them.

This rocks, as usual. I love the details: in the end about how they set up Cahty for the week end or before, when you explain that she gets a sort of Pavlov reflex each time she has to use the diaper. As Flo said, there would be many girls eager to try a bit of Meridon's discipline. Good to know you are makeing efforts to thicken the plot and (hopefully) continue this for a while.

This was one of the phew good things here around that I constantly kept watching during last 5-6 months, hoping for a new chapter. The plot was probably nothing special, but you have talent for building up realistic characters and situations. Kudos for doing a good job with if from start to the end. Do you plan to write anything diaper related in the next future?

This is really good. What I love about "Meridon" is that that there are fixed rules and all the girls are in the same boat, so in the end they learn to consider normal, and even somehow pleasurable, the dispotic treatment they are given. I'm eagerly waiting developments of counseling session with Miss Mallory and hope you find a way to reinsert the five girls that did the journey to Meridon together with Cathy.