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babytom2

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  1. Thank god,thought this story had gone extinct XD
  2. I wish the chapters were longer,with such short pieces it's harder to stay connected to their world.
  3. It kinda seems like a rerun of your other story,at least so far.
  4. Kinda farfetched that a kid that young would blackmail their sister.
  5. Really short chapter,but I like these type of stories.
  6. But you said she was in the crib,then all of a sudden it's the scene before again.
  7. Um,I thought she was in the crib....what's the last paragraph about?
  8. It seems to be getting too big....alot of characters to keep track of.
  9. I find it odd that so many people they know are cool with this.....becoming unrealistic.
  10. Seperate your dialogue from the rest.It is confusing.
  11. glad there's more story.....was dissapointed at the abrupt end last time.
  12. Where is this headed?Seems like a train off the rails.
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