Andyman3
Members-
Posts
85 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Profiles
Forums
Gallery
Articles
Store
Everything posted by Andyman3
-
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Woooo. Just as long as you don't give up π, it breaks my heart when artist give up. I can't wait to see what you do. -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
The suspense π -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Awww it was such a good story. Don't stop π -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Nice chapter. It was so peaceful and focused on the basic details, I really loved that. It's really easy to follow and can't wait for more. π -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Can't wait to see how George and the moms friend interact and I know the girl he met will be funπ -
Yes that is a big thing, pace. I would say you've kept a slower pace to go over all the details and it's great. I would love for the pace to speed up a tiny bitπ. Does get a little to tense.
-
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Wooo busy holidays. Now we can see more chapters from you. π -
What Kills A Story For You?
Andyman3 replied to PeculiarChangeling's topic in Critiques and Writer's Discussion
If your talking about this topic(diaper stuff) I would say things being obvious were it's going. I've seen many stories were the diaper topic shows up and that's it, you know exactly what is going to happen. You could say abdl story clichΓ©. I prefer doing usual realistic stuff then bring the abdl stuff up. π -
Awwww that's wonderful and heartwarming. π
-
Hope not, that would be boring. Things need to get back to stable, so much could happen.
-
Hahaha yes. Your story is well written and has enjoyable parts so it has become a full thing that people enjoy. I've seen plenty like this lol. Yes you have a "story" so zoom to the end with the extremes would be lame. I want everything to be fully utilized. One of my favorite scenes is the baseball game, Zach was in diapers butt he fully played the game. Wasn't an extreme. Can't wait to see what you do next. π
-
Wooo new chapter. I really want some hopeful stuff to happen. If Zach's dad can help him he can live his life again. It will still take some time before he is out of diapers because of what happened. π
-
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Woooo great just worried. I've seen some horror stories of people bullied out of art, from people or just life. π -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Awww don't stop -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Can't wait for next partπ -
I'm so happy he did something, he needed to get out. He is young so not always the smartest but lots of willpower, absolutely wonderful. I hope something good happens, not like he'll be free of Kelly for a little while. π Wow feels so good when he has the will to fight.
-
"mommy doesnβt have to do everything for you", your the one turning him into a baby! I do like this moment with the kids. I wonder were the story is going to go, this seems pointlessly hash.
-
Going Green (A Shifting Sands Story) - Chapter 12
Andyman3 replied to Little Sherri's topic in Story and Art Forum
Cool story but I have to wonder why you wrote it this way. Seems really dark -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Oooo the suspense π -
Oh that's cool the ending. This has been quite a long hospital part, really wonder why. Zach keeps meeting younger people, wonder what's going to happen.
-
Going Green (A Shifting Sands Story) - Chapter 12
Andyman3 replied to Little Sherri's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ya this is what makes your stories so good. This is like a reset to the other. Shifting Sands needs a time skip, it's gone so far it's hard to process right now. Wow this story is interesting. Wonder what going to happen to oli. Church and friends hu, interesting can't wait. π -
Going Green (A Shifting Sands Story) - Chapter 12
Andyman3 replied to Little Sherri's topic in Story and Art Forum
Oh I like this grandpa π. The way it's written is wonderful, feels like your actually there. -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Yes definitely want his reactions realistic. Don't want things forced. π -
Breaking Ground (A Shifting Sands Fanfic) Chapter 5
Andyman3 replied to Alutheria's topic in Story and Art Forum
Ooooo I love it. Wow the possibilities. Looks like he's going to have fun and all the fun moments possibilities with Jane. π -
Wow interesting chapter. Well the rompers would be great once he is back home, so he can not always be watched. Poor thing, maybe now would be good for a time skip.