How are the effects from this shot able to determine if she is is public or not, I feel like your stretching the readers suspension of disbelief here if you don't properly explain the mechanics on something like this.
I'm delighted to see these authors knocked down a notch or two. It irritates me much how many of these writers shill and spam their Patreon accounts everywhere or put one-page stories on free story websites and ask readers to pay for the rest on a different site.
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