Awesome birthday party hahaha, although I was really hoping Laura would be in attendance, I bet she would have gotten the perfect gift for the little birthday girl
I appreciate the shoutout, and I love that you felt inspired to share your own writing.
As I write this, I'm still reading the story so far, and I'm enjoying it. Good dialog, and well thought-out scenarios. I hope that you continue writing and sharing your work.
I like the story though it does suffer from what many of these do which is a lot of 'tell don't show'. It is said to be very horrible but it's not shown. Martha didn't do anything
Thank you for your comment and suggestion. I'm glad you enjoyed "The Babysitter." I'm currently working on Chapter 25 of "The New Family," which gives Lucas's perspective on the babysitting experience.
Lucas isn’t particularly opposed to wearing a diaper at night, but he prefers to have a good reason. He has already on his own a few times put one on when the family was watching a movie, just to be prepared in case he fell asleep.
I’ll think about whether I can incorporate more diaper use or other ADBL elements into the story, and I’d be happy to consider specific suggestions as long as they’re consensual and aren’t harmful or too extreme.