LilKistopher Posted October 13, 2013 Share Posted October 13, 2013 sounds like a great time... but it also sounds like it was quite embarrassing too. Link to comment
Fulldiaper Posted October 21, 2014 Share Posted October 21, 2014 Two suggestions, and two P's, paragraphs, and punctuation. Paragraph's break up the story and into bite sized pieces. Three to four lines per paragraph make for good reading. An occasional comma to pause and then allow the reader to continue are also nice. Link to comment
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