A Yaoi/Hentai Experimental Microstory

[Nana Abby]

He squatted down, lifting his skirts clear, tugged down his lace trimmed cotton panties and looked up at her. "It hurts!" he sniffled, but she had no sympathy.

He groaned, squeezed and she heard a squelch moments before his deep sigh of relief. As he stood, his skirts falling loosely back over his knees, they looked down and saw what he had done.

"What is that?" he cried, "What.. How.. Why did you make me do this?"

She laughed cruelly. "If you'd worn diapers as I told you that tentacle wouldn't have been able to get inside, you'd never have had that," she told him smugly, "It's your own fault. Now, pick up your new baby, you're a mother now."

[CDfm]

I think this might have been just a little to micro. I have no clue what happened 

[Nana Abby]

The story begins midway through an ongoing situation, introducing an unnamed male character. By opting not to name the character the author simplifies projection by the reader of themselves into the character's role.

The character is described interacting with female attire, indicating through the use of possessive pronouns that he is himself wearing it. This corresponds to a subset of Yaoi literature, in which men (or frequently boys) reject traditional masculine norms and take on historical female gender roles, particularly those deemed sexual in nature and (a further subset represented here) involving male pregnancy.

The pregnancy is first hinted in the second sentence, an oblique reference to pain without spoiling the rest of the story by revealing its source. That sentence also introduces the second character, again unnamed. This character is probably female but it would be foolish to assume that must be the case given modern flexibility around pronouns and gender.

The second paragraph ends the pregnancy through an inelegant and somewhat offputting description of giving birth. Again the nature of the act is kept hidden from the reader, providing suspense and drawing their interest deeper into the story and its characters. The paragraph continues by generously describing the movement of his clothing, something many crossdressers find more important than actual sexual content in an erotic story.  A supplementary role of that sentence is to firmly establish the active participation of the male character in the act that has occurred.

The third phase of the story sets out a new narrative, portraying the male character as a victim, perceived or otherwise. This implicit acknowledge of subservience to the female character is exciting to dominant women and many men alike, allowing a broad audience to enjoy and find pleasure in the short piece. The male character's apparent confusion may also be considered endearing to some women and a maternal trigger amongst others, evoking a desire to protect and comfort the hapless male.

That parental instinct is demonstrably absent in the female character, evidence by her response. She turns the victim story in a new direction, suggesting her own role may be more innocent than initially thought, and that she'd tried to help him prevent the situation. This does of course leave available the possibility that she acted in both capacities, both offering escape from a vicious situation while actually causing it herself. The obvious interpretation (which is nonetheless subjective) is that she was attempting to put the male character into diapers, something thematically appropriate to this site.

The surprising addition of a tentacle to the story is where the crossover into Hentai occurs. Although not all Hentai involves tentacle rape that is the subset the Author first encountered, searing a lasting impression on her psyche. By referring to the tentacle getting "inside", the female character infers that the male character was penetrated by a tentacle, her choice of words implying a lack of desire of consent from the male character, evoking the spectre of rape. She then refers without describing it to the child he's just birthed, delaying revelation to the very end of the story,  an intentional twist that both provides answers while increasing the horror of the reader.

Offsetting that horror are the female's final words. After further establishing perceived blame on the male character himself (quite possibly a malicious case of gaslighting) the female character finishes with a caustic statement that both provides the fulfilling revelation and also positions the male character in an unusual role, granting the reader the delight of finishing on a humorous tone.

Hopefully that aids your interpretation, understanding and enjoyment of this short work. 

[CDfm]

Now that was an awesome explanation!