Snowed In At Mrs.Robins House

[Guest ritzcritz]

The following is my first story, feel free to give feedback and add to it in any way, thanks!!

It was a couple of days before christmas vacation was about to start and Alex was trying to make sure he could at least get ten sales for his fund raiser before vacation started. Alex was 9 years old and unlike most boys his age he was very very short, around the height of a big toddler. Alex was also very shy and got nervous quite easily so participating in the fund raiser was a pretty big deal for him to say the least.

Alex lived in a small town in South Dakota which got a lot of snow during the winter and was about to get hit with one of the biggest blizzards in years. He had planned on trying to get some sales from the last row of houses that led up to his friend Jimmy's house before he would be staying at for a couple of days while the blizzard was hitting the town. With very little luck of any sales, he approached the last house before getting to Jimmy's house, Mrs.Robin's house.

Mrs.Robins was an older lady around her late 50's/early 60's who lived by herself, her kids were all grown up and had moved out years ago. Alex had never really talked to Mrs.Robins before but had seen her every once in a while letting her cats outside while walking to Jimmy's house. She had grey hair and was fairly tall for a woman of her age. Every once in a while, she would have her friends over for knitting parties, all of which who were of her age if not older. Her house has all kinds of strange garden statues in the front that were rather strange but welcoming at the same time.

Alex had stomped some of the snow that had just begun falling of his shoe once he approached her porch and slowing but firmly knocked on her door. After a couple of seconds of waiting he was about to leave for he had to use the bathroom very badly and Jimmy's house was not too far at all. Right as he was in motion to turn around to start walking the door opened up and Alex was a little intimidated at the old woman's height. "Hello there, making some fund raising sales for your school young man?" she said in a calm voice. Nervously, he mumbled the special deals on chocolate and other candy that his school was selling and was trying to hold in his pee at the same time. "Well you know, its cold out here and a boy on your height shouldn't be walking around in this weather judging from how deep the snow will be, why don't you come inside and we'll go over some of this?" Not wanting to do so, Alex in a small panic let out a stream of pee into his underwear as he walked in the door and quickly covered it up with the sales booklet he was holding.

"Now, lets take a look at what your selling mr.salesman" which made alex a little annoyed inside but he was already super nervous for he had peed his pants. "Umm its okay I can just read it off to you actually, I know if all off the top of my head" Alex said nervously. "Oh don't be silly that book has got tons of things of sale for Christmas" said Mrs.Robins as went to take in from his hands and before Alex could think to grab on to it hard she slid it from his hands exposing his soaked crotch. "Oh my, did you have a little accident??" Mrs. Robins said with concern to which Alex said yeahhh in a very quiet voice under his breath in embarrassment for peeing his pants and for an old lady to call him out on it. "Hmm, well it seems the snow is coming down wayyy harder than I expected now, it wouldn't be wise of you to go walking out in it at this point, you would get lost in it all" said Mrs.Robins. It's okay i'll be fine said Alex as he got up out of his chair to walk towards the door but before he could get a couple of feet he felt a hand dig into the back of his waistband, stopping him in his tracks and then was swiftly swung over Mrs.Robins' shoulder.

Alex's heart sunk from how nervous he was now, he didn't even fight it or ask was she was doing and instead was just silent like a baby. "Since your going to probably be stuck here for a while, I should get you cleaned up seeing as you look a little uncomfortable in these soaked pants of yours. Alex still didn't reply and just stared at the door as he was being carried upstairs. Mrs.Robin then opened a door letting a certain scent his Alex's nose, he knew this scent somewhere, something very familiar and upon entering the room there was a crib, a changing table with stacks of thick disposable diapers, baby powder, wipes, oil and baby lotion. Then it finally hit him, she was going to diaper him!!

She then carried him to the changing table and softly laid him down to which he then said nervously "...are you going to put diapers on me?". Well, you see, i've always wanted grandchildren but never had any and i've always kept this room in my house in case my children ever had children of their own so that when they came over they would have a room and since your going to be stuck here with me for a little while, I think it could be fun to get to know how it feels to be a mother again or grandmother and care for a baby. In shock of what was going on, Alex just lay on the table in silence just accepting what was going on.

Mrs.Robins lifted his shirt over his head, tossing it over her shoulder along with his pants in underwear. Now Alex was completely naked in front of this old woman that he didn't even know. She then pulled the strap tightly around his waist, "we wouldn't want you to fall and hurt your little head would we?" she smiled. The then grabbed and unopened box of wipes, huggies diapers, and a bottle of baby powder. She started by lifting Alex's legs by his ankles with one hand and wiping him with the other. Her hands were very gentle and soft with lots of wrinkles too. She made sure she wiped up all the pee that had dripped down his legs and that was on his balls and thighs too. She then sprinkled a nice amount of baby powder onto his bottom making the whole room smell like baby powder as well. Lastly, she grabbed a thick huggie and placed it under him, slowly lowering his legs on to the table but pulling the diaper between his legs quickly and taping them firmly. "Alex you might just be the cutest little thing I have ever diapered and i'm surprised at how well I was able to diaper your little behind after almost thirty years of never changing a diaper!" she said very happily and very pleased. Alex just sat there with his mind racing.

Mrs.Robins then unstrapped him and slung him over his shoulder again with her hand supporting his very thickly diapered behind. She carried him into her living room and placed him on the couch and handed him the remote to the t.v., "now you watch t.v. like a good little boy and i'm gonna go make you some hot chocolate and cookies." Once she left to go to the kitchen Alex sat there mindless flipping through channels as he though about what was going on, as much as he didn't like it he thought well at least she's gonna make me some nice cookies and hot chocolate and he knew that old woman knew how to bake when they wanted to. Maybe he'd be able to leave after he ate to, so for the time being he would just somehow make an attempt to enjoy the situation even know it wasn't easy to. She called him into the kitchen and put a shirt over him knowing he was probably cold just wearing a diaper to which he mumbled "thank you", "no problem sweetie, now enjoy those while they're hot!" she said with enthusiasm.

A couple of hours pasted as Alex sat there watching t.v. and wondered when Mrs.Robins would let him leave. He then felt his stomach start to grumble and he thought he should go use the bathroom quick before he messes himself again but this time only worse. He hopped off the couch and walked over to the bathroom and reached up to open it but only it was locked. Alex then walked to the kitchen where Mrs.Robins was knitting and said "Mrs.Robins your bathroom is locked for some reason and I gotta use the bathroom I think. "Your a silly baby aren't you, the bathroom is around your wittle butt silly, oh and I called your mom to let her know you'd be staying her a few days with me until the storm passed us" Mrs.Robins said. Then the reality of the situation hit Alex, this old lady is going to baby me! and she called my mom so now i'm going to be here for days until this storms passes! having a hard time processing what was going on, Alex walked into the basement to be alone to think of what to do. He tried holding in the poop for almost three hours downstairs but then finally accepted what was going on, this lady was going to diaper me and baby me whether I liked it or not. With some hesitation Alex slowly started to push the soft poop in his diaper while couched on his knees.

After a minute of pushing he finally got it all out and the relief made his accidentally fall back, landing on his bottom and smearing the poop all over his his butt. He just sat downstairs for another hour trying to avoid Mrs.Robins so that she wouldn't change him even know he knew it was unavoidable. He then heard her coming downstairs, "alex? you down here?" she then saw him on the ground and smelled the poop at the same time too. "Phew!, did you make a stinky? you left me an early Christmas present in your diaper didn't you?" she said playfully as held her nose playfully teasing Alex. He sat there blushed and thought to himself well maybe it would be kind of nice to get out of this filthy diaper and get cleaned up so then he didn't really care about getting changed anymore and in fact was hoping that Mrs.Robins would stop teasing him and just change his stinky diaper.

"Well, I'd love to get you out of that stinky diaper but the only problem is that I need to ration how many diapers we use, who knows how long that storm will go on for, i'm sorry sweetie." This was just great, he had revolting the thought of her putting him in a diaper and changing him and when he finally just wanted for her to change him, she told him he would have to bare with it for a while so that they didn't use diapers up too quickly. "Its okay honey, babies and toddlers always make messes in their diapers and go hours without being changed, after you eat dinner in a couple of hours, I'll change you before I put you to bed" said Mrs.Robins. Which was just great considering it was only 4 in the afternoon.

Alex sat on the couch watching t.v. in a pile of his own poop just hoping that the hours would go by quickly as Mrs.Robins sat next to him humming to herself as she continued to knit. Alex then began to shiver from how cold it was in the house and Mrs.Robins noticed, "Awe poor thing you must be freezing, lets get you into something a little warmer" she said before picking Alex up again and holding him with her hand against his bulging diaper seat and carried him into the nursery and open the closet. She then pulled out what looked to be a little beat suit, which looked like a footed sleeper except with leg parts and a little hood with ears on them. The inside also had very very soft fur on the inside and had two buttons on the back where the butt was, so that it could be accessed very easily. She quickly took off his shirt and slid him into the little bear sleeper which Alex instantly felt warm, and said "thanks, i feel a lot better now." She smiled and said "its good to know this went to some good use, this wasn't very cheap but i'm glad to know that its keep at least one stinky little boy warm."

She made him some macaroni and cheese for dinner, with some milk that she had slid some laxatives into so that he would poop it all out when he went to sleep. Alex was starving and ate the macaroni like it was the best meal he had ever eaten. "Be careful that you don't eat the table silly" Mrs.Robins said to which Alex let out a slight smirk. He was all done and downed his glass of milk very quickly. "Thank you Mrs.Robins" Alex said putting down his empty glass. Mrs.Robins smiled and said "you know what time it is?" Alex had almost forgot about the mess he had carried around in his huggie all day. He held her hand as she took him into the nursery and took of his baby bear sleeper. Once the diaper had hit the air it smelled very very poopy, "PHEW!!!! you are super stinky aren't you? aren't you? she playfully asked Alex. She lifted him and strapped him tightly to the changing table and slowly untaped his diaper and pulled it back. It was quite a mess, she used the diaper to wipe some of the excess poop off his butt before tossing in into the trash. She used plenty of baby wipes to make sure she cleaned the poop of his butt, inner thighs, his penis and even some that slid up his back. Before powdering him and putting a diaper on, she opened a bottle of baby oil and took it into the kitchen to warm in up in the microwave for a little bit so that it was nice and warm. She squirted some of it on her softly wrinkled hands, and began to run it on his thighs and crotch area, and even down his butt crack a little bit. After she was done, she put a new huggies on him tightly and snug, and got a out a blue sleeper to wear to bed.

Mrs.Robins carried him over to the crib which he fit in perfectly due to his small size, and turned out the light as she walked out the room. Alex sat there staring at the ceiling for a bit thinking about everything that had happened in this weird day. Could he get comfortable to possibly even enjoy being diapered by Mrs.Robins? He was so nervous that being diapered and babied by this old lady gave him a sense of not having to worry about anything. For the time being though, he wasn't very comfortable yet and wondered how long he would be stuck in her house. After an hour of thinking, Alex finally exhausted his head enough to fall alseep.

Alex slowly opened his eyes, looking up at about seven or eight older women including Mrs.Robins looking down at him as he woke up. Who were all these old women? friends of Mrs.Robins he assumed that lived close enough to be able to walk to her house once he told them of the news. Alex was super nervous at this point as they were all commenting on him to Mrs.Robins on how cute he was and how she did a great job diapering him. He then saw one of them start to sniff the air a little and then he thought to himself, uh oh for his diaper was full soft poop and pee. At this point he wondered what the day was going to be like....

Thank you for reading! please feel free to say whatever you liked about it and if you want to I would love for you to add to the story where I left off, eventually I'll continue it if enough people like it but I would love to see how other people add to it. Thank you

[DiaperedSpencer]

I liek your story lot and I hope you continue it!

[Cute Baby]

This is lovely, yes please do continue it.

[007specialk]

I do too it a very nice story!!

[the diaper mike]

please go on.

[turtlepins]

Where was she when I was 9? It's a great story, though you should proof-read, unless you're like me and write when you're really tired and just post the thing! Thanks for sharing.

[Guest ritzcritz]

okay, so now with part 2 of the story

Alex was still very tired but at the same time very alert from all the women staring down at him and his bulging diaper. One the women reached down and picked him up under him arms and pressed her nose on his diaper at the crotch area. "Wow, he was really busy last night, he's super stinky". Alex was nervous because he was as comfortable with these old women like he was with Mr.Robins (even know he wasn't that comfortable with her). The lady then turned him around and pulled back his diaper to examine the mess, "looks like he peed himself too."

"Well I figure he can wait until about lunchtime until we put another clean diaper on him", said Mrs.Robins. "We?!!" Alex said inside his head, it was bad enough he was going to have to wear a messy diaper for a while but now there we all these old women too. Mrs.Robins got out the bear sleep and slipped Alex into it. All the ladies started to aww and comment on how cute he looked, Alex just wanted to crawl in a hole. "He's a stinky, yet cute boy isn't he?" Mrs.Robins scooped him up and carried him into the living room along with all the other women. They all sat down and started to knit while Alex sat on the floor and played with some legos that he had found in the basement. He was playing on the floor for about an hour trying to sit on his knees to avoid spreading the poop all around and trying to keep his mind off it was well until he felt a presence behind him.

He turned around to see Mrs.Turpin. She was the youngest of all the ladies at around 56, she was also the biggest too probably around 300 pounds or so. She went down to pick up Alex right as he tried to crawl away, hoping that she might think its cute and let him be. But she swooped him up before he could get very far. He could forget trying to keep his mess from spreading because her hand against his bottom spread the poop around his legs, balls and up his butt. She took him over to where the rocking chair was and started to bounce him on her knee, making a huge mess inside his diaper. She then put him over her shoulder and began to rock back and forth. Mrs.Turpin whispered that he was a stinker.

Alex had been so tired he fell asleep for a couple of hours and woke up to the smell of fresh soup that Mrs.Robins had cooked for him. He was carried over to the kitched and strapped tightly to a highchair which he didn't have to use the previous day when he had eaten the macaroni and cheese. After he finished eating, his face was wiped off and Mrs.Turpin picked him up and swung him over his shoulder, carrying him upstairs along with Mrs.Robins and the other ladies. "You made a big poopy didn't you? your very stinky but we're gonna clean your butt and get you into a clean diaper mr.stinky" said Mrs.Tupin." Alex was more nervous than ever.

I'd like to leave this part of the story at kind of a cliffhanger because i'd like for someone to pick up where I left off =D

[diapered-fox]

This is a pretty good story and I hope to read more.

The only problems I have with it is the occasional spelling mistake (though they're few so its not much of a problem) and the lack of people actually talking and you instead saying their talking.

It helps to "Show, not tell"

But great story in any case.

[babyjennie]

Dear Ritzcritz, thanks for contributing a story, and you did pretty well for your first effort. However, it's always best to re-read your work before posting, and try and correct any mistakes. Like for instance, in your opening paragraph, you told us twice that Alex was going on vacation in the first line.

Quote:It was a couple of days before christmas vacation was about to start and Alex was trying to make sure he could at least get ten sales for his fund raiser before vacation started. Alex was 9 years old and unlike most boys his age he was very very short, around the height of a big toddler. Alex was also very shy and got nervous quite easily so participating in the fund raiser was a pretty big deal for him to say the least.

Alex lived in a small town in South Dakota which got a lot of snow during the winter and was about to get hit with one of the biggest blizzards in years. He had planned on trying to get some sales from the last row of houses that led up to his friend Jimmy's house before he would be staying at for a couple of days while the blizzard was hitting the town.

The words ‘got’ and ‘get’ are null verbs. They don‘t really mean anything, and add nothing to your writing. Replace those words with a real verb; one that has flavour. You don't 'get sales,' you 'make sales'. You don't 'get a lot of snow', instead it snows heavily. You don't 'get hit by a blizzard,' a blizzard was about to hit town. Get it?

Because your posts are fairly short, try reading them aloud to yourself, and see if the punctuation - and the words - make any sense. Even though I can work out what it is you're trying to say, the last sentence I quoted makes no sense.

All this in the first two paragraphs! Still, try not to be discouraged and keep writing. Just re-read what you wrote, aloud if possible, and try and make sure it makes sense.

Hugs from Baby Jennie in Australia