Kit Story Part 4

[lil fox]

I blinked my eyes a few times… They hurt just trying to focus. It was like everything swirled into a white gray blur. I slowly regained my senses back in waves; first a chill of cold air brushing up against my fur, causing me to shiver. Then a soft padding noise around me. Finally I began to re-distinguish defining features and I made out someone standing above me. Something was wrong though, but I couldn’t quite place my paw on it. I tried my best to stand up, only finding it not possible. After the attempt I fell back into the soft ground. My vision focusing a little more, I watched snowflakes drifting down onto my face, then, Fern’s loving eyes met with mine. “Mama!

[:dlb]

Very creative, great job.. Awesome story-telling.. Too bad it's just fantasy, hehe.

[Drillers]

Very good story, other that some minor grammar errors, truly wish this was true.