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It's one thing to be obessed but it's another thing to go digging through. Another person's stuff to get what you really want dude.
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9 hours ago, MinnesotaWriter said:
We'll have one (maybe two) more chapters with Maddy and Hannah covering events over the rest of the weekend, but Hannah will be a recurring character past that point as well. Plenty of chances for them to continue to interact.
That's nice to know.
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I like the way that just being around Hannah is giving Maddy thoughts. It would be nice to see a little more of the two of them together and see what happens.
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I have a feel of how Vanessa came across Octy and took her in.
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Makes me wonder if the child services lady really put any effort. Into finding a home for Octy or if she just pulled up the first family on a list and it turned out to be the Gavins.
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It's a nice way to explore some of the other characters more and can focus on both Megan and Octy in a nice light,
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This is turning out well.
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It was a nice story something that I did enjoy reading sad to see it go.
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Its sad to see this come to an end as Sarah has a very long road ahead for her. Wish the mom had gotten something even worse rather then 10 years.
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Its nice to see how worried Lisa was for Sarah she's a true friend,
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It's nice to see that Sarah made the right choice. She will be a lot better off with Lisa and her family instead of with her sister. I would of liked to have seen what some of the messages were on Sarah's phone.
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Sarah's left with a very hard choice to make I think. She should stay with Lisa's family as they can offer her a lot of help rather then being in a new area. With only her half sister and people and places that she doesn't know.
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Where would the Mom have fled to or is currently in hiding. I'd find it really weird if perhaps the Mom was related to Lisa's Mom is some weird and twisted way even though. Nothing was ever mentioned or suggested at, at all.
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With two months having passed since Christmas Vacation it mean that we are currently in March. Are we going to be skipping forward those few weeks to find out the test results?
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On 1/21/2024 at 10:14 PM, MinnesotaWriter said:
To clarify the injury, Sarah landed extremely hard on her side, so looking more at something internal that got messed up, rather than any type of brain injury.
Perhaps it was Sarah's kidney or hip that ended up getting really messed up.
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I feel like all that's gone on and everything that is happening. Has led to a point where Sarah will or might have a nervous breakdown.
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I wonder if the CPS found the mom's christmas videos of Sarah.
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Will we get to see how the mom reacts to having the cops arrest her? I'm still waiting to see what the answers are for what Sarah's friends thought when she wasn't able to contact them.
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Finally Sarah's free from the abuse that is her mother. But where's she going to go from here will Sarah stay with Lisa or will she be placed in a foster home. Will her sister be taken away as well or stay with the mom. I'm looking forward to learning how the CPS found out.
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This is a nice story that you've written here.
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Sarah still has to deal with whatever is going to happen once she runs into her friends again when school starts.
But when Sarah get's older she's going to have a lot of emotional baggage. Or might even have thoughts of trying to harm herself.
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Perhaps the missing father means he might have passed away.
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The question to be seen is can Sarah make it in her big girl training.
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3 hours ago, spark said:
The best person for Sarah to speak with is her counselor. My advice would be: walk straight to the counselor. Do not go to first period. Walk directly to the office and ask to talk to somebody, and share the exact the story that she told her mom.
I have a feeling come Tuesday Sarah. Won't even consider doing that she might talk with Samantha and Desi. But with how things turned out with Lisa I don't think she will do anything. She's dug too deep a hole for herself and she's not going to be able to get out of it.
The Girl Who Wanted to Wear Diapers (Ch. 30 - 5/12/24)
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Question is during the sleepover will it be a normal one or will disaster strike?