bledj

First of all, great story guys! Really appreciating the pace of the story, the character build up and the way you use the language. Such a thrill to read! I really like a level of humiliation in these kinds of stories, and I think you've gotten that fitted in to the story very nicely. So overall, I'm a huge fan of this story and you guys! Something I'd think would be cool, would be if Simon was a younger sister of one of Lily's friends. Someone she has known for most of her life. Maybe Lily even used to babysit Simon? I'm not picturing Simon seeking revenge for something mean Lily did though. I just think it could add another layer of humiliation if Simon was younger than her. So I vote for Simon to be a younger woman who has known Lily for most of her life, and eventually Simon would become her mommy. Maybe her babysitter? Keep up the good work! :)