I read the first half of page one, interesting world building. I like how you took time to slowely establish how this society works I think I read another couple stories in this universe and was highly confused as to the mechanics. Glad to see some clarification. While it was an entertaining read I do feel it works better as dystopian fiction (with a side order of cosmic horror?) than erotica (the surgical mutilation and kidnapping definitely an arousal killer). I once created a selfinsert GURPS character that was an interdeminsional tourist and would fund expeditions to other worlds. I can't help but wonder what sort of hell would break loose if alternate universe me showed up with a full team of scientists, support staff, and security personnel. Only to attacked by sadistic giants?
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I read the first half of page one, interesting world building. I like how you took time to slowely establish how this society works I think I read another couple stories in this universe and was highly confused as to the mechanics. Glad to see some clarification. While it was an entertaining read I do feel it works better as dystopian fiction (with a side order of cosmic horror?) than erotica (the surgical mutilation and kidnapping definitely an arousal killer). I once created a selfinsert GURPS character that was an interdeminsional tourist and would fund expeditions to other worlds. I can't help but wonder what sort of hell would break loose if alternate universe me showed up with a full team of scientists, support staff, and security personnel. Only to attacked by sadistic giants?