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This has taken an incredibly dark turn within just a couple short chapters! This is not your usual stuff at all, but I do want to see what comes next. I hope there will be some good explanations soon! Maybe like Isaac is only imagining all this violence going on - the rape of Elyx, carving Isabelle... I don't even know what to say. Edit: Oh yeah, I know what to say. I can't wait for more...

Was that a breakthrough? An explosion? A crash? I can't really even imagine what it was. It certainly didn't seem like either Isaac or Piper - not at all! Could it have been something repressed by one, the other or both? Was it a misuse of the drugs Elyx gave Isaac? All I've got is a spinning head and a lot of questions! They can only be answered with more of the story, but I also sense I may end up with even more questions before any of them are resolve. Sigh.

Lots of little hints popping up, but what significance each has, if any, isn't clear. I'll just hang on to those thoughts and we'll see what develops. More and more parallels popping up between Isaac and Piper. Isaac is awfully reluctant to mention "the box" to anyone; is he protesting a bit too much? It sure looks like Piper isn't feeling well from the icky stuff Isaac had to drink! Elyx seems really creepy at this point! Well, not that they haven't seemed that way up til now, but this liquid is scary. And... oh no!! Not nearing the end! Oh well, Sophie, I say that about this point in each of your stories! And you always come back w another story. And I always (almost always) come back to read them. Still lots to learn about this one though. Patience, patience...

Yes, she has. That was mentioned earlier in the story. I had to look back and find it at one point myself. I think, I think... Yes, what the hell? Lots of subtle things going on in these two short chapters. Isaac is so afraid of mentioning the diapers - hmmm, is he protesting too much? He lets Arry misunderstand his relationship with Isabelle which he acknowledges could end badly - will it? And either way, I'm interesting in seeing how this plays out between Isaac and Isabelle. And interesting 'coincidence' that Arry talks about a prof who shouldn't be teaching, but - All this could be important... or not. Fun to think about at this point anyway! Just in general, as the dreams continue it seems like a gradual blurring of the separation between Isaac and Piper. And I'm wanting to see some of Piper's thoughts about Isaac. She's very tied up in her own life at this point and there's been no mention of her dreams save that one reference... that I'd be hard pressed to find again.

Exactly! She did handle it extremely well. There's a small enough age difference for Piper to get caught up but large enough for Carlotta as the adult to realize she is the adult and should be responsible about it. ...even though so often it's situations like this that can lead to statutory rape. We don't need that in this story!!

Great chapters! She's experimenting with diapers and her own sexuality. With the diapers, she's being brave and stepping out; with her sexuality, she seems to be following instinct. Carlotta is avoiding a relationship - which is a wise boundary to observe, I think. But what will this open up for her and Lucky? Mom is so afraid of what Piper will buy for clothes that she swallows Pipers story and even offers to bring her shopping! And now I can't wait to read of Isaac's reaction to all this! Maybe you meant "so you want to put the cover on"?

Right at the end of chapter 17. Fifteenth or fiftieth? Wasn't he already lying down? I didn't notice anything in ch 18. Both chapters were great. I'm beginning to wonder if there could be a relationship or just some sort of hint in Elyx being gender fluid while male Isaac and female Piper are tied together through their dreams. Then there's the relationship between Piper and Lucky becoming clearer while we also see the 'friendship' maybe becoming more between Isaac and Isabelle... all curiouser and curiouser. Maybe I'm just projecting...

OK... Well, I wondered and now we know. Isaac does know that Piper dreams about him. Did we know that before and I just forgot? It came out as such a simple statement of fact here that I'm thinking maybe I forgot. And Isaac is very reluctant to tell anyone about what's in the box. Hmmm... is it only protecting Piper's privacy or is this going to end up being the big common thread between them? Or is there even more? Lots more? All that is why I continue reading!

Oh, how nice you tuck the biggest little detail neatly away in the larger story line! Not an enormous surprise, but still a very interesting turn to the story. I'm sure that by the time the story is resolved, the two of them, Piper and Isaac, will have learned that the other is dreaming about them... will one of them actually dream of the other dreaming about them? Just a hypothetical and at this point I wouldn't want to know. Now I'm wondering to what extent Piper's interest in diapers is from actual need and how much ABDL. After all, we know about her paci's, right?

You called it a hand dryer just a bit later. I bet that's what you meant to say here. I wonder how angry Lucky will be that she was abandoned. Maybe it'll be better when she worms out of Piper what's in the box... and I'm confident she will in no time at all. I also wonder how this all is going to be taken by Isaac... and Elyx!

We've now learned a few more interesting details about Piper that I'm sure are important to the story. I can't wait to hear how Elyx might interpret this last visit from Piper.

Nothing takes away from control like setting up the diaper boy for certain failure! Thanks for this chapter.

This sounds like the 10 year challenge! I imagine I have this story somewhere in my files. At this point, I've pretty much forgotten what I'd written. I do remember chapters being dropped on at least one story I had posted. I don't remember how I resolved it. It isn't super likely that I'll remember to look for the story, check out the situation with the chapters, and post any revisions. If I get a chance and do remember, I'll put it up. Thanks for the positive comments.

This is getting all the more interesting. Elyx is confident of learning more as Isaac sleeps and I'm looking forward to it also. Elyz is a fascinating character by himself - NB gender identity and presentation. I'm fascinated with his name. I won't ask its significance but wonder if the selection of thay name was more than random - though not about vodka. Not sure how or if all this ties into the story thread but even if its random, it's so nice to see the inclusion alone. I'm sorry there isn't much reaction here. Is a lot of your readership on Patreon now? If so, I'm happy for you. Still, the interaction here has always been fun.

Lots of interesting ideas in this chapter! Isaac is now speaking as Piper, but then doesn't remember. And then that Piper supposedly dreams of Isaac! The time difference - the 90's thing that Hopsalot just mentioned - makes it all the more confusing, at least for now, that she dreams of him. It will be interesting to find out what the real connection is between the two of them. And it seems that, as interesting as Elyx is as a character, they will find it interesting to discover the connection as much as we will.

Well, that was interesting! ...if short. I'd gotten into the story by catching up, as I usually do. This was the first chapter I had to wait for. Sure, I'd rather read more in one shot, but you've brought to a point where we'll be hanging until you post more. I find it strange that people might bail on the story because of short chapters. A good story is still good even when in little pieces. Hmm... I'm putting more meaning into his being 'the right guy to come to' than 'I'm good at what I do.' Elyx seems to understand more about Isaac and this dream situation than someone else might just from what Isabelle could have said. It's interesting that Elyx jumps quickly to addressing Piper instead of Isaac. I don't want to read in more than might be there, but because of my own identity I can't help but wonder if Elyx, being gender fluid, has extra insight into a guy (Isaac) having such vivid and personal dreams of a girl (Piper). Not asking for any hints and I'm so often far off from the story as it will develop, I'll just try to be patient (and have my patience tried ) as I sit and wait for more.

So you've got me wondering what the connection is between Isaac and Piper and whether she is real. By now I know far better than to start guessing, but the more I read, the more I'm hooked. Now we've got a gender fluid grad student hypnotist coming into play. What the heck is going on in those weird, warped and wonderfully weird minds of yours!

Is Selphie yourSelfie? Is there yet another devious mind involved? And Yuujarian, thanks for your deviosity! ...meant in the nicest, most respectful way!!

OK, well, with this chapter it looks like HE is a Siss-HE! He's loving this... and uh oh, she's gotten over the embarrassment and is on to the next level! And so now Ana is going to try to outdo Selphie! Well, serves her right... she should be in a diaper too! hehe... this is fun looking at the main theme of the story and also thinking about what the two writers are doing... well, isn't that kind of like your usual stories? ...except this gives us a double layer of authorship!

Well, now that we have that settled! On with the story!

Well, personally I never subscribed to the saying "Incest is best" but then we can't blame Sophie and Pudding since the story is totally controlled by Selphie and Ana! And with their writing, who knows who our two characters are? I'm not guessing, but is it out of the question that these two weird, twisted authors haven't split one life into the two characters? No, I'm not putting that out as a credible theory but simply pointing out we don't know the minds of these two writers. I'm mean, we know how twisted our host writers can be - no offense ladies, but each of you does have a side to you... So what Selphie and Ana have cooked up is beyond anything I could imagine!

I'm so glad you've got this up, giving me something to read again. I can't wait for you to put more up; I'm eager to see how low zie will sink and how she'll help hir get to those depths! It so nice to read about hir dresses, but as a little baby girl it won't be appropriate for hir. So I'm wondering what kind of baby girl clothes zie will be dressed in. Yes, I used less gendered pronouns for Milo. Milo may think zie is still a guy, but zie isn't really, anyway. We KNOW zie is going to learn an important lesson, but will zie finally admit hir inner longings? Is zie just a fapping, wanky dirty boy or is zie a frustrated young woman? Oh, this is such good fun!

Oh yeah! I agree, although in my list of favorite stories, the #1 position is held by so many Sophie and Sophie/Pudding stories! 11 more views and this story will be at 20,000 views!! I don't know how many were, "Is there an update? Is there an update? Is there an update?" but still 20K is a good indication that a LOT of people have been looking. BTW, Amanda didn't have Madison's number and vice versa. Could I have both their numbers? I wanna go to the mall with them too!

Don't worry Sophie, I'm an anal old lady... a grammar vigilante... I refuse to say grammar nazi...

Great comment, Sophie! In creating a character, you can describe that character but not necessarily define the character precisely. And in not trying to define the character completely you make that character far more interesting. Real people are not totally predictable; why should story characters be any more predictable? It gives you more latitude as a writer and gives the readers more to consider. I love it! And in chapter 28, did you mean "poring"... or were they pouring their iced tea over the books? And one more thing... I LOVED this chapter! I think I love both Jamie and Madison and now I want Jamie's Mom as my mom (if I could be like... 40-50 years younger than I am now...)