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    Discussion: Barbara Davis, Why Thirteen?

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    Alright, took me a good bit longer then I expected/hoped, so I fear I'm a bit late to the party now....

     

    First off, I've said it a million times I'll say it a million more, bbykimmy, kwoceans, you two are two of the very few authors I read, I love all your works, all the twists and turns and character depth and the emotion in these lines of letters manipulated into a fetish tale.... A FETISH tale... The same genre that just... Well not always the best of talent... 

     

    But this, this little masterpiece here? I read the same sections dozens of times over just because... 1. I kinda sorta had to, but T2O.... I wanted to ensure myself that I could see this as a full story (well as much as you can) with all 26 of these endings... 

     

    My absolute favorite still stands to be GE#4 with Amelia. That ending just kinda got alllll the right buttons and while maybe a bit short (probably just me being greedy) it was beautiful and made me really daydream for a day or two lol 

     

    My favorite "bad" was probably... "Betray Claudia first" because that one just pushed all the right wrong buttons... Especially Barbara accidentally damning herself to no vocals in those last few moments. Like that got my crazy thinking and whew XD thanks... 

     

    For the most part, I don't have a whole ton of Critique... Except Claudia, all the characters seemed to stay those characters no matter the path taken... Gavin always acted as I would expect him to... Henrietta very much either played a prime predator role or she was the boss with too much work... Amelia was very patient and gave ample chances to prove oneself... Yada yada... But Claudia, while sure i quickly glanced something about her being in later (I didn't actually read most these comments... Just quick scroll) she just seemed so.... "Well I (the author) need this here so here it is"... Ya know? I wish there was maybe a bit more in terms of the robonanny/mech daycare (also a personal favorite idea) I'm absolutely in love with this CYOA, no doubt a top favorites lol

     

    TL;DR I rambled, move on now

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    Breaking the Girl: A Novel

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    (Hey! You! Read this thing here: Sorry not sorry, I got "triggered" and this is a "triggered" rant... Skip it if you want, I don't care..except you Kimmy >.>)

    Alright no.... I gotta jump in again... I just gotta, hold up....

    Ok... Soo... Kimmy... Lets talk... 

    Kailee and Aubrey.... Oh my word... It gets my blood boiling and I want to just get in between them so badly and break that up. Oh hell no... Kimmy you are making me violently protective of a character I was expecting to despise in a story that I first started reading because i expected much worse things to happen to poor innocent bystanders (that's a whole different story/ idea/ topic/ whatever/ shutup!)... Kimmy my poor heart please.... I secretly relish in the pain and suffering of others but these two.... These two... FICTIONAL CHARACTERS!!! Have ripped me with more emotional pain than I could have ever imagined and I must thank you and your skill for.... Well just skill for creative writing... I must say I'm upset at you, but that's only cause DANG IT MY HEART BLEEDS!!!.... Anyways I don't recall if it was ever mentioned if Aubrey was blocked or not after the job was done... I'm too afraid to look honestly... I can't root for Kailee's message to get out more. I personally myself neeeed Vanessa to get her message because darn it she started it all even if it wasn't intended!....

    I'm sorry.... Rants done *blushes* lotta emotion.... Keep up the awesome work! I'm always liking when I can :D

     

    p.s. oh yeah, yay Dani and Vanessa being couple-like.... Ugh... I can't... Kailee and Aubrey beat me down for now, maybe later... 

    p.s.s Dani knows she's little even if she may not fully have a word to it for herself. Placing my bet now, just saying

    The Biggest of Desires - Chapter 21 (Updated 6/19)

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    32 minutes ago, Baby Billy said:

    Same old same old, loose interest and forget it we will after a while.

    Hey, it sucks, we all agree, but no matter your views, beliefs, or your whatever, at the end of the day as the reader, we simply do not have that choice. We can be rude and prickish about it, or we can accept it as the adults we are, offer our support as the community we are, and possibly the author will feel encouraged to post otherwise because of what we, as the reading audience, do in response to their choices.

    The Biggest of Desires - Chapter 21 (Updated 6/19)

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    .... A 20 min comment of praise and love and theory and references... All gone..... 

     

    I'll try to recreate it later but the main points are:

    Forking amazing chapter

    Awesome comments 

    What kind of mommy is Naomi? (Lisa? Or Wendy?) 

    Please don't take our chapter's away cause Trip is wrong *tears up* don't punish us because of his mistake TT__TT..... Even if he may have a smaaaallllll point

    The Biggest of Desires - Chapter 21 (Updated 6/19)

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    Darn it Kimmy, kwoceans.... I was enjoying my lurking but I can't hold it anymore... First off, great story. I love this so much

    Second, omg the ways this  can go.... For one, no matter what, if this serum lasts long enough (everyone says 2 days... It's only been successfully tested on ONE amazon prior) then Naomi is gonna realize something is off and who knows how hard she'll have to search for answers. Then Sabrina is in huge trouble... 

    Or maybe she had a plan for family/friends to visit sooner than later, how is Sabrina gonna escape that? What will the serum actually do to Naomi? It's only been tested once before, will it affect her differently? Will she have her memory faded out? What about the club??? Where's the next chapters?!?!

    Velvet - A Calibeen Story (Complete!)

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    Throwing this out there right now.... Velvet never does break, but rolls with the program, something happens to change her opinion of this place from "dont care i have to be here" to "i can make this place better", she overthrows... Marlow?.... And brings this facility to heights it hasnt even began to dream of...

    Velvet - A Calibeen Story (Complete!)

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    Sooo... Maybe im being selfish... I mean, y'all do write a lot for us.... But please please pleeeeaaase can we maybe get update? Im very intrigued in how the "old" facility handles the girls, why is Annie the way she is, how long till velvet loses her marbles, and seeing this back and forth with velvet and Collette makes me wonder exactly what little twists are in store for them? 

    With desperation and love

    Eevee

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