seanwill25

I do not think Maddy, as the stories main character, has really "suffered" enough to achieve her goal. It also seems like she is unwilling to make the sacrifices necessary to achieve her goals. For example she does not want her little brother to know she is a bedwetter and she did not want her older sister to find out either. She does not want her room to smell like pee because her friends might find out. Her parents are very resistant to putting her in diapers or goodnights and I do not think Maddy will be able to overcome their resistance without a lot more time (very little time has passed) or some sort of event that would force her parents in to action. For example her family could visit her bedwetting cousins and Maddy could could create a situation where she would be found out to be a bedwetter just like Maddy discovered her sister was a bedwetter. The embarrassment she would experience would create enough sympathy from her parents that they would buy diapers for her. Right now though, she is not willing to make a sacrifice like that, and she will not until she has been tortured more by the author. Unless she wants diapers more then she cares about her reputation and what her brother, sister, parents and friends think about her she should not get diapers, because once she gets put in diapers that will become her identity. I am still hoping that Maddy decides to increase the pressure on her parents by having daytime accidents. Thank you for the story it is a very fun read. Also do you have any plans to release another book? I would love to be able to support your writing.

Predicting it now, she is not getting pullups. Her parents being bedwetter's themselves probably believe pullups/diapers are traumatizing. The only way she will be able to get pullups then will be to have daytime "accidents" when her summer break starts.

You are an amazing writer with the gift of giving the reader what they need not necessarily what they want. I am so glad you skipped the trope of humiliating the antagonist by making them go to school in diapers and instead focused on the relationship between the mother and the daughter. I believe that the conflict between the mother and daughter is the heart of the story and I am glad that it seems like that will be the focus of the next chapter or chapters. I am also happy to see that you are going thru the day slowly with lots of details. Obviously Sarah believes that her mother would make her wear diapers to school. If she has another accident early on Saturday, I wonder if Sarah would intentionally have another accident to avoid the possibility of wearing diapers to school on Monday. She also seems resigned to wearing diapers now and might just give up on potty training for the weekend. Sarah may even justify this as showing solidarity to her friend that wears diapers all the time. I also think that Sarah could be surprised by her mother and be kept in diapers all weekend long, but that seems like her mother would be breaking her own rules if she did. Can't wait to see how this is resolved in the next few chapters.

Nana should put Mary in diapers to teach her a lesson. They are Mary's diapers anyway.