It is not very often anymore I come across something that is truly original! I am very excited where this goes.
As for the writing. You are a great writer with the few and very far between spelling errors are easy to see what it should read. Please take as much time as you need to finish this story yourself. I would hate something this wonderful get ruined by another author taking over your original plot.
Just my 2 cents,
-Sissy Boy-