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Overall I thought this story was brilliant. I think the ending might have been a bit stronger if the story was broken up slightly differently so that last two chapters of part four were the first chapters of part five as that's really where the denouement lies but I liked that it wasn't over the top. I'd love to read more stories written in this world in the future.

This reads more like an idea for a story, or a world in which a story might be set, rather than a story itself. Not sure if this was intentional or not but I would enjoy reading more in the future if you wrote from the point of view of one or two characters who were subjected to this "attitude adjustment" and described their feelings and reactions as it happened. At the moment it's a little bit hard to become invested in the story when there's no one to identify or sympathise with.

Honestly this is one of the best stories being written on this site at the moment. Don't know how it hasn't got more comments. Really looking forward to the final installment.

This is a fantastic story. Really enjoying it so far! ?