Love this so far

Fozzie Bear

A very promising story.  Child abuse via diaper humiliation is arguably the most common theme in this forum, but it divides into subsets:  prepubescent children, and adolescents.  Les was wise to go with the latter because we expect a mid to late teen in a situation like this to show some initiative and work out a solution for him/herself.  After all, what teen doesn't have issues with one or both parents?  So, there is ample room here to avoid the dreaded deus ex machina solution that plagues stories about the prepubescent.  The power dynamic with pre-teens is so one-sided, and their life experience so limited, that the only truly credible outcomes are (a) kid gets destroyed; or (b) kid's plight comes to the attention of an adult willing to render assistance.  In real life, this is a minister/priest, teacher, doctor, dentist (alas, no kid in a story on this site has ever had a cavity), relation, family friend, etc.  Police and/or social services to the rescue.  Granted, Euripides invented deus ex machina, and Shakespeare used it, but editors in contemporary publishing houses really frown on this sort of ending.  We want the protagonist to be his own hero.

There is a lot of information in the thread I do recommend checking out the whole thing.  It doesn't have a name.  It's an irregular surgery.  But it consists of three things: resection of the bladder neck, prostate, and sphincter.

I will admit that I have a way with words. I will also concede that it's not a sensible way with words. I have my own headcannon for the super long term plans for that rift. But I also don't want to throw that out there because it's not part of this story. Oddly, I've started working on a second story as well but that's a ways off as a project. I don't want to get super distracted and not finish this. I'm enjoying writing it and hope others can enjoy reading it.