This is a wonderful story about understanding and supporting each other. A story about choosing love over obstacles. It might be developing fast, but it is written very well. But for the next chapters, why don’t you tell us more about the characters?
Evelyn just gave a soft sigh and gently took her daughter's thumb back out her mouth, Valeria it's been a long drive you must be hungry, besides don't you want to show your cousins how big you are?"
John somehow forgot that in Amazon society, the more rare your little, the more social status you are perceived as having as a result.
Littles are a status symbol (among other things)