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I think the book he's reading is *Redwall*; it's the only one I know of with a mouse in armor. -
I don't trust hook*n loop. Cloth-like start to smell sooner than plastic. Some of them even get damp on the outside. -
Last chapter posted seem to have some structure problems and is also posted twice, but still a nice addition. -
When you quote me, please note that the first chapter was changed after I wrote the comment. In the first version, the mother only tells Paul that he’s starting to wear diapers at night, after which she goes on to put a diaper on the astonished child without any explanation. Excuse me, but that explanation doesn't make any sense. The story could have started with Paul waking up in a wet diaper on Saturday morning, or you could have started the story on Friday night if you wanted to include the long scene where Paul gets a diaper put on. -
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