Baby Bloom

[jds]

Lauren Bloom is crying in her crib I go up to comfort her my name is Sky I'm a red head I am 26 years old and I'm a mommy to Lauren " hey its ok sweetie I'm hear and i hold Lauren and sway back and forth with her shh shh let me tell you the story of how Lauren Bloom came my daughter she was resting at first but i won in the end it all started when i met her at new Amsterdam hospital as one of her patients.

[junyour]

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