Third Time is the Charm (Updated 19/08/15)

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It definitely took me some time to read this but it was certainly worth it. I have really enjoyed the story so far. I was in fits of laughter when Ryan was getting his wax job. I was very happy I could give this a like and I am absolutely looking forward to reading more. I know you have said that proofreading isn’t important for you but I think that if you took the time to fix some of those little mistakes you would have a outstanding story going. Don’t get me wrong, I do think this story is fantastic but I also think that without the distractions of all the little mistakes would make it so much better.