Andy Posted April 28, 2010 Share Posted April 28, 2010 I don't know if you really can call it a poem since it can sound like a loose list of two line rhymes too. Well, here it goes: For Tracy I wish you were here, When you aren't near. You stood at my door, And your beauty knocked me to the floor. When you talk I like your style, And not just for a while. I am not sure if you'd like a kiss, So I better give it a miss. This is how it ends, But I hope we still can be friends. As long as it will last, It is a nice romance. Unfortunately not more, That makes a piece of my heart sore. But I don't want to bore, So I don't write more. Link to comment
BabyAltair Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 It's very pretty, thanks for sharing. Even though it's a sad poem it gets the point across very well. Hope things work out at some point. :/ Link to comment
Andy Posted May 4, 2010 Author Share Posted May 4, 2010 Thanks for the kind words BabyAltair. I don't think it ever will work out but thanks for the good wishes Link to comment
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