shinjie Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 I dunno if this guy is a loon or what, but he/she posts these strange poems and reflections here http://www.diapersexvideo.com/ makes me laugh. An excerpt from "My Diaper Journey": "I am so very tired and weary of my life, trapped in the body of a diaper. My choices are not mine. I can do nothing but hope that at some point I’ll be opened up, and catch a fleeting glimpse of the world beyond mine. And yet I am not blessed with memory for the beautiful things. Only the shit that is mine. Whenever I ask God who am I, he tells me that my life function is all. But I struggle to accept that. And the more I struggle, the more he baits me, throwing me deeper and deeper into the darkness. Is this how I shall be saved? ". Link to comment
Bettypooh Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 I'm glad that you get something out of it but it's not nice to poke fun at other people From just what you posted here I see deeper issues and deeper feelings than this person seems to have the eloquence to deal with well Writing well isn't as easy as you might think, and this seems more like a 'stream of conciousness' post than an edited story to me If you think this is bad, then you would go nuts with the SOC's that I write to myself to gather my own thoughts with Then again I never post them, so you won't get a chance to laugh at me because of something like this Bettypooh Link to comment
Aleia Posted January 5, 2009 Share Posted January 5, 2009 Here's a good rule of thumb: the words "shall" and "shit" should never appear in the same paragraph. I love nothing more than ripping on writer/poet wannabes, no matter how many psychological problems they have (or wish they had). The number one characteristic of a wannabe: the inability to write anything that doesn't include the words "trapped," "darkness," and "glimpse." I apologize to anyone here who is poetically inclined, but diapers will never, ever be a good subject for non-humorous poetry (yes, I realize this particular excerpt isn't a poem). Link to comment
curiositykilledthecat Posted January 5, 2009 Share Posted January 5, 2009 Rule of thumb, if you don't want to be criticized don't post your deepest darkest secrets online for millions to read. Link to comment
curiositykilledthecat Posted January 5, 2009 Share Posted January 5, 2009 Here's a good rule of thumb: the words "shall" and "shit" should never appear in the same paragraph. I love nothing more than ripping on writer/poet wannabes, no matter how many psychological problems they have (or wish they had). The number one characteristic of a wannabe: the inability to write anything that doesn't include the words "trapped," "darkness," and "glimpse." I love you!!!! The darkness charlie murphy! Link to comment
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