Like A Fish

[babyjennie]

Dude, this is seriously one well-written story! Your character development is excellent, and your use of language continues to impress. As one other reader mentioned, it's fabulous to read a story with correct grammar, puntuation and layout, too. Only one (minor) criticism; try to be sparing with your qualifiers ("He laughed a bit," etc.) Believe it or not, you don't normally need to qualify your verbs. Otherwise; BRILLIANT!

Hugs from Baby Jennie in Australia

[dldad]

I, too, have to add my commendation on a story superbly written. It kept us interested and waiting for the next chapter. I hope they have many more adventures together.

[restlessfox]

just wow...

[BoTox]

I know you've started the other story but I do hope you continue to fill this one out. I'm hoping to find out how Lily's job turns out.

[Heven]

I may end up coming back to this one, but I have lots of unfortunate things planned for Daisy first, plus more to come.