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Traycie
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Well written, managing two concurrent storyline’s is more than challenging. I’m also thinking that Rosa’s new baby girl is Chloe’s sister and that can only be a good thing for both of them. Clare in a diaper will be a new experience for her, will she be distracted and botch the presentation?
Megan meanwhile has a cunning plan and Daniel will have his work cut out to keep Chloe safe. With both storyline’s on cliff hangers the next chapter is going to be outstanding. Also looking forward to Chloe’s reactions when she is put into commercials and a tv show by her temporary Mommy Megan. Great work, thankyou.
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Grrrr… that is super frustrating. Both girls are now on the brink of something big, also very much looking forward to Chloe’s reaction when she becomes the star of a diaper commercial and features in a tv show, will it be as a baby or a toddler, and what type is show will it be, Call the Midwife, Criminal Minds, Fuller House, Friends, Bewitched, Desperate Housewives, Little House on the Prairie, The Handmaids Tale, oh the suspense is killing me!
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That makes it even more interesting, can’t wait to see what happens here. ??
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Chloe’s younger sister has been legally adopted by someone Daniel knows, that could be a relative or another Amazon, either way he knows more about their preferences than he is letting on and it sounds like she won’t be getting an easy ride like Chloe…. You have piqued my interest now as this will add a new dynamic to this excellent story.
Meanwhile Clare has to safely navigate the dangers and threats of her etiquette school presentation and we are left to make an educated guess as to what the compulsory uniform will look like, while that won’t be an issue for her Amazon partner it’s unlikely that they would have the same uniform sized for a little so that only leaves one option.Megan is also determined that Chloe will get the full baby experience during her stay, the idea of Chloe featuring in TV baby commercials and as cameo roles in a couple of sitcoms are excellent plot devices that your readers will get enjoyment from while being nightmares for Chloe.
Excellent work and a challenge to keep multiple plot devices and storyline’s on the go concurrently, very much looking forward to the next chapters as these all play out.
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My bet is on David’s partner wanting to adopt her and David slowly making 5he case for that to happen.
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Me too, with Ellie being petite any thoughts she has of at least being treated like a little girl should be vapourizing about now, I expect the surprise David has for her is a locking pacifier and that she will soon find herself being put back into diapers and baby clothes by his girlfriend as she goes son a Mommy trip.
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Another great start, you have me hooked already!
I can see an invite to come over to the Amazon Mommy’s house for a play date with her little friend and an afternoon in diapers coming up….. -
If they don’t have anything in the house Katherine better make the pharmacy the first stop or Dawn will find herself removed and taken to an orphanage for her bad behaviour.
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Not only am I hooked but I can feel the tension on the line as you crank the reel and pull me in toward the boat! An outstanding start and looking forward to how this develops.
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Did a search and nothing came up for ‘Tracey’s Story’? Am I missing something?
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I love that you have a Tracey in this story!
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OMG, this is going to be an awesome story, looking forward to the next 100 Chapters!
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Imagine a world where you could do just that, time skip though a portal to the Amazon Dimension for some ‘little time’ and then time skip back, with a choice to go back to your current life or an earlier time in you life and relive your own childhood, with your own parents or randomly assigned parents until the portal again reopened. Writing this comment has made me think of Ziggy on ‘quantum leap’.
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If the Amazons get their way the only transportation she is likely to be using in the immediate future will have four wheels, a lay back seat, safety harness, a sunshade and a padded material in a nursery print theme with its power provided by an Amazon Mommy pushing it. If she is lucky it will be a stroller, if the worst happens it will be a pram where she is on her back, with little control over her bodily movements. Great work, looking forward To the next chapter!
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OMG... this is shaping up to be an awesome tale of epic proportions!
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OMG, very cute leaving your readers to imagine what plays out next!
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On 7/29/2019 at 2:27 PM, Mee said:
Dawn then winced, as she looked at her bare thigh. There was already a large red spot from where she’d been maimed, and it further reinforced her fears of crossing this woman. But it all made it so much worse when she coaxed her forward, holding what sent her into a panic from the start.
Nowhere near close to panties, and seeing its white, crinkly form, Dawn could see the rectangular padding strain against the plastic backing to it. It thinned into simple paper around the waist; not like the exquisite fabrics she once wore. There were no detailed embroidery on it, and instead smiling butterflies and bees. It was a sick and twisted insult to what she once wore.
“Now who’s ready for a pull-up?” The way she held it so expectantly, it was as if she were waiting for her to jump into the damn thing. Dawn didn’t budge, still protecting her modesty, and the Amazon annoyedly sighed.
Dawn wasn’t nearly quick enough to react, as with a simple shove she was on her bottom, feeling the cold tiles touch her skin made her shiver. And in her state of confusion, a mix of plastic, padding and paper was snaked around her feet and through her legs. The Amazonian force behind it forced her upright and back onto her feet, as the pull-up fell into place around her hips once it was further tugged upwards. The unusual girth to the crotch forced her legs just slightly apart. She could only blink, feeling the invasive cotton pressed against her crotch.
No...she wasn’t. She couldn’t be…
While waiting for the next instalment a reread from the beginning has reinforced that this is an excellent piece of work. New information that was glossed over in the first read and detail that has been forgotten as the story has progressed comes to life further cementing the readers perspective.
You have created an outstanding piece of literary work Mee, and our visions for Dawn’s future look to be closely aligned as she navigates her new reality. Looking forward to the next few chapters of tension, suspense and surprise for your readers as Dawn has no choice but to face the fact that she isn’t going home anytime soon and LPS are now on the case looking the opportunity to intervene and get Dawn back into full time diapers and a second babyhood.
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11 hours ago, TerranV said:
I hope I'm not giving the impression that I didn't like the story. I did. I really did. You should be proud!
I agree in toto, this was an excellent story and you can be more than proud of your efforts, it is outstanding!
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Bravo, You have delivered a manuscript that has kept us all engaged and wanting more at the end of every chapter, it is a masterpiece that explored many areas and introduced a number of complex characters and side plots.
I’m not so sure about the dark side. While I would have liked to see the story expanded on the occasions where Liv was taken by different Amazons and for her to have experienced a period of enforced babyhood before being rescued by her friends or making an escape, as she did from the very first Amazon who had taken her and put her in a toddler harness at the store, I would not have wanted her to be turned into a permanent infant with her adult cognition wiped for good.
It would have been interesting for her to have experienced a range of different Amazon parents, parenting styles and baby care from rich to poor, cloth and disposable diapers, travel to other cities and countries, being stuck in a place where English was not the first language and being unpotty trained and ending up in full time diapers as she knew the outcome of failure but could not work out why she could not keep her training pants clean and dry.
In the end the story would have still had the same happy ever after conclusion with Charlotte. It would have just explored a number of different temporary Parents, parenting styles and environmental scenarios along the way.
Your writing style is excellent, would you consider doing an ‘alt’ version where the opportunities above are expanded or with permission allow another author to expand those opportunities ensuring that the ending is not compromised?-
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On 7/26/2021 at 9:00 AM, Moon3ye said:
It is good that Kathrin now has no choice but to give Dawn the full baby treatment.
Whether Dwan realizes that this is for her own good I doubt.
I think to understand what Dawn has with James and Kathrin a stay in such an orphanage would be of great use maybe for 48 hours to question her. Of course without forced regression but she should see what happens to other Littles who do not conform
The LPS Workers visit was perfectly timed, Dawn in just a diaper running around the house probably saved her, had she been in big girls panties and clothes it would have obvious that James and Katherine were treating her as if she was still an adult and that most likely would have resulted in her immediate removal from them. The good news for Katherine is she now has no choice but to treat Dawn as if she is a toddler or she will be removed from their care.
The shopping trip is going to be interesting, Dawn now has a car seat and a single diaper but nothing else, that isn’t going to last long given she hasn’t been to a bathroom since the day before and she has now had breakfast and juice.
Im wondering if the woman who tried to kidnap her originally from the first day of her tour or the one from the hotel or another Amazon will seize the opportunity to grab her while she is out shopping with Katherine given their dissapointment in losing her at their first attempts, or Dawn gets unintentionally separated from Katherine and taken by another Amazon until Kathrine can get her back. Ideally she needs to be given a short sharp reality check that she isn’t going home any time soon and that means she will be some Amazon’s toddler for the foreseeable future. James and Katherine are the nice parents where she is best placed, she needs to learn that from being out with another Amazon Mommy for a period of time who isn’t so accomodating to her adult wishes so that she comes to that conclusion of her own accord.There are so many possibilities already, no doubt you will have more surprises for your readers, thank you for your superb narrative so far, every chapter leaves your readers wanting the next as Dawn’s story unfolds.
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9 hours ago, Mee said:
“That’s fine...” Katherine answered hesitantly, “but we were just about to go out! We were going to get Dawn some clothes, diapers, a bed, toys, and anything else she’d need…!” She spoke in a hurry like her life depended on it. Maybe Dawn’s.
But for Dawn, hearing her short list involved a mention of toys and diapers, both red flags to her... It better have been ridiculous lip service to this horrid woman, otherwise there would be hell to pay.
Yet the woman seemed to scrutinize. “So Dawn doesn’t have any kind of nursery here?”
“It...It was just going to be done today; we were already planning…
Dawn continued to be a silent, pissy stress ball for the Amazon until the case worker came back downstairs.
“You mentioned getting a bed for her?” ... “A-a crib,” Katherine retroactively corrected herself, earning an angry glare from Dawn...
“I see...Well, Katherine, it was a pleasure getting to meet you, and Dawn,” .... She fished out a card from her suit jacket and handed it to Katherine. “You can expect a visit from me within the week, however I can’t give you the time to expect...
“Is...is there any legal trouble?” Katherine asked with hesitation.The woman didn’t respond immediately, which even Dawn knew was cause for concern. “Not necessarily,” she finally did say, “this could all be a misunderstanding, ... but since kidnapping was mentioned...”
“I should have some more information to share with you and your husband during the next visit. There aren’t any plans to take Dawn from your custody for the time being, given your explanation for only getting her last night. That being said,” she started to show signs of disapproval, “I hope to find that Dawn’s environment is a bit more appropriate for her by the time I’m back?”... Katherine had become a yes-man entirely. “Yes! Of course… We’ll be going out right after this; we were just planning to.”
The case worker’s unyielding look softened into a smile. “Great then. I’ll see myself out, but I’ll see you soon.”
Great to see another chapter in Dawns adventure, this is an epic story line with huge potential.
With the LPS lady making her expectations crystal clear Katherine is about to embark on a shopping spree for diapers, a crib, highchair, playpen, toys and baby clothes for Dawn and to turn the bedroom into a nursery, is she for real or is it all a charade?
Dawn is thinking that if Katherine tires to make her use baby furniture, clothes and diapers 'there will be hell to pay'.
Will it be at that point when the LPS worker comes back unannounced for an inspection, sees that Dawn is refusing to let Katherine be her new Mommy then on the spot remove Dawn from Katherine and James care only to place her with a non nonsense Amazon Foster Mom until the kidnapping allegations have been sorted out. Now that would be an interesting outcome, Dawn in a situation where she fights it and pushes back but regardless of her attempts is treated as if she was still a diapered toddler.
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Me too, now that would have been a fun outcome for our little protagonist, perhaps her time is still to come after the convention finishes they still have a couple of days away together in a place where no one is likely to recognise her so that will give Mommy an opportunity to play dress up or in her case dress down.
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On 7/21/2021 at 6:34 AM, LittleFallenPrincess said:
I crept down the hallway to the kitchen, making sure not to make any noise, even taking extra care not to breathe too heavily. Which was difficult as my heart was beating like crazy.
As I got to the door, it suddenly swung open.
“There you are. Come here!”
That’s when I recognised where I knew that face! The restaurant! It was the LSS guy who had tried to grab me that night Charlie lost me!
Charlie had told me how he was corrupt and sold littles into adoption centres and stuff, and that she had gotten him arrested. He must have escaped custody or something and is now out for revenge I can only assume.
I grabbed the door and swung it back into his face, causing him to fall backwards clutching his nose.
“You little fuck! I... I think it’s broken!”
I turned and ran for Eliana. I needed to get both of us to safety.
Problem was, the booties had no grip on them on these hardwood floors, and I fell face first onto it.
Wow, and I though this story had gone all soppy, then out of the blue the LSS guy shows up out of nowhere and almost succeeds in capturing little Liv to sell to his next client.... that would have been a fun couple of chapters until Charlie manged to get her back.
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10 hours ago, LittleFallenPrincess said:
It'd be pretty tough to get it off, even with the right tools. It's custom made, and remember that their tech and materials are way more advanced than anything we know of.
Plus it'd tell Charlie exactly where Liv is before they could get it off her. And I wouldn't want to stand between Charlie and her love.
There is another option open to a Little Trafficer. While use of the mobile network normally prevents a person halting the GPS data transmission it can be achieved through the use of a faraday cage. The trafficer can then remove the sim and load it into another bracket that is locked around the wrist of another unsuspecting little, found passed out at a bar or a homeless little that thinks the bracelet she has been given is a piece of expensive jewellery. With the bait now in place to throw Charlie off the scent it will be too late to stop Liv’s departure from the country by the time Charlie finds where the signal is coming from. Little Liv would be well out of the Country and firmly ensconced in her new life as the tot of a couple of no nonsense Amazon parents for the foreseeable future.
Charlie would find her in time given her resources and money but it would not be a quick and easy search or extraction.
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Me too, I love this story but get super nervous every time it ends at the edge of a cliff!