Traycie

This is an excellent story Mee, it has sufficient detail to enable the reader to imagine each scene as it is played out. What is next in store for Dawn? Will she make another run for it and be taken by another Amazon with baby fever or will she willingly go with Katherine and find herself stuck as Katheryn’s little girl and a slow regression back to babyhood. Hoping you have not abandoned the story. ?

Reading between the lines the previous two chapters may already hold the key to the answers Sam is so desperately seeking and they most probably won’t be to her liking, even thought she is yet to put the puzzle pieces together and work that out for herself. In the previous chapter.... Karen walked into the living room behind Sam and knelt down at the edge of the playpen, she looked very serious..... “You are to remain absolutely silent, is that clear?” Karen warned, “This is my best friend and do not think for a moment that she will help you if you tell her anything.”... Sam looked up at Karen with fear.... she had never seen the intensity Karen was showing right now.....“If you talk to her at all she will do nothing to help you and you will be punished.” Karen warned Sam, “I promise you will never forget the repercussions.”... Has Karen already let Martha in on her secret that while Sam looks like a toddler she is actually eighteen? Did she (Sam) really look like such a baby that this stranger would mistake her for one? “Oh my God!” Martha came rushing into the living room and knelt down in front of the pen. Sam fell over on to her wet butt in shock, “This must be Sam! Hello, little one, aren’t you just the most adorable little thing!” Sam was shocked. There didn’t seem a question in this stranger’s mind that Sam was a baby ...She is just the sweetest thing.” Martha said... Marth’s actions confirm that she is either knowingly playing the ruse that Karen has let her in on or she actually thinks Sam is a real baby. In the current chapter, For an hour or so Sam was left alone in the playpen. She could occasionally hear laughter from the kitchen but never any specific conversation. What were Martha and Karen discussing and laughing about? Did Karen bring Martha in on the secret of Baby Sam before her visit or in the kitchen? Did Martha already know the real story and provide Karen with the dissolvable tongue numbing tablets? Was that the real purpose of her visit or a coincidence? When Martha excused herself out of the nursery for a few minutes to make a phone call Karen reached into her pocket and pulled out what looked to be a kind of dissolvable tablet. Who was Martha calling? Was she making arrangements to have Sam permanently regressed to an actual toddler by a doctor friend, or perhaps she is doctor herself? Was she (Martha) making arrangements to take Sam to a babysitter so that she could experience the full toddler experience and have a complete stranger diaper and feed her, or was she making arrangements to take Sam back to her own house for the night, or was it simply a coincidence that she had to make a phone call? Eitherway Sam should be highly suspicious of Martha and her intentions.

Bravo Elfy, your master stoke with Karen numbing Sam’s tongue so that she is reduced to baby babble and the hard left turn with Karen and her girlfriend Martha unexpectedly taking Sam to the park in what is now her stroller dressed as a diapered toddler has delivered intrigue and suspense. Will Sam behave in the sandpit and earn herself a treat, if so what exactly will that entail? Karen askedMartha to pack Sam’s diaper bag while Samwas being changed in the nursery. Will Sam use her diaper and be changed by Martha on the picnic table or the grass at the park as Karen watches on? Will Karen meet one of the Mommies of Sam’s new playmates, strike up a new friendship and agree to a play date for Sam at her new friend’s house while Karen goes shopping or gets her hair done? Will Sam be later babysat overnight by one of her playmates Mom’s while Karen and Mark go back to recon the orphanage to see if toddler Abigail is still there? This is shaping up to be an excellent story with potential for a serial novel. ????????????????????????????????????????????

Drama, action and regression to toddlerhood all in the first chapter, this is shaping up to be an awesome book.