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  1. With lots more story to come, I wouldn't rule it out!
  2. Nat really is gone. I'd wondered, but this chapter shows that she is now completely gone. And I'm sure it's only going to get worse!
  3. It is amazing that Nat has been broken this much! She's still having thoughts that she knows what they need to do, but it has been worked out so carefully. And when she discovers her profound need for diapers, that will break her further. I still wonder how her fear of the two captors will translate into needing and obeying her sister... but there apparently is still much left in the story. Such horrible things happening, but in the context of a story, wonderful!
  4. Thanks for the two chapters... just hurry back! ? Just when I think she's broken, she rebels. It really hasn't been all that long, so it does seem reasonable. I don't think she can take much more. The piercings do seem counterintuitive as they are changing the input to slut rather little girl. Maybe it will work. I wonder, too, if they forced a diaper change on her, it might add to the humiliation and reenforce that she 'needs' the diapers. But then again, I'm not writing the story! I'm appreciating the two of you doing the writing!
  5. So now we have a clear view of the plan. But this is only chapter 7! At this point, I'm just marveling at how many plot twists you can and will toss in to keep us guessing! Natsuko is still pretty feisty, which I think is to be expected. Being kept in a diaper is going to eat away at her skin, but also her pride and eventually her self image. The piped in narrative will help with that as well. She's getting dependent on the chocolate not only as food but as a drug. Now the shots. It appears to be a well crafted plot to force her back to total dependency, but with this laid out this soon, it's going to be fun to see how far into this we get before there's some sort of reversal or at least added intrigue. While each interchange between the two girls and then between Natsuko and the men is interesting and fun, my guess is that something is going to have to give fairly soon. Guessing what that might be is far beyond me at this point!
  6. Wow. All of a sudden the story got very interesting!
  7. A little bizarre, but that's one of the many things I love about your stories!!?
  8. Good resolution. I disagree with WannaTrip; yes, Marlowe added tension to the story, but there was tension between Velvet and Colette and also within Velvet and within Colette. As horrible, unethical and whatever else the Mt Calibeen experience was, there is a part of me that looks at the end results and thinks it wasn't so very bad after all. Instead of execution in some cases or life imprisonment, the 'graduates' of the program were free and productive individuals. Yes, this is a rather twisted and perverse view. I guess this view though is in part because as I read A&S I was going through my own gender struggle from which I've emerged as a woman who is happier in her life than ever before. But a perverse and sick way of achieving a goal that few if any except for the one mentioned as Velvet's 'first' wanted or would have selected if given the options knowing the details.
  9. I'm hoping for some major resolution in the last chapter. There's been a lot already, I know, but there are some loose ends I think.
  10. Do you really expect her to fail? And I do expect that she has adequate "fail-safe" provisions programmed in as a fallback. And I'm not going anywhere! I'm camping here for the next chapter!
  11. I, too, am sad that this story is coming to an end. Audrey and Stacy are where I came in... back when I thought I was another gender. Thankfully I didn't need to go through the Calibeen experience to get where I am now! Back when I read A&S, I kind of thought that experience would actually be pretty cool because I had truly submerged my understanding of self. Unlike Velvet, mine wasn't imposed by hypno. Kind of ironic that it's now over five years for me. I think it would be interesting for me to go back and re-read A&S as well as the related stories, but we aren't quite done here yet.
  12. *too Oh Grammar Patrol, I hope you meant 'to' not 'too'! We all have typos... More time has passed, but it is still amazing to see such powerful results in Velvet! Colette has reason to be proud of her project. Velvet has changed so much, wonders about it but the one who was so sure they could not be hypnotized has been thoroughly remade and can't even figure out exactly how she was changed. Her reaction to Colette's rejection of the idea of liking diapers through sexual tension was one of acceptance with a bit of hurt feelings rather than anger. She is definitely a new person!
  13. Wow! Colette really messed with her library while she was in phase zero and that horrible, horrible man turned into the pretty little girl he never knew he wanted to be! It really does seem like Velvet is either ready, or at least close to ready to move forward in the program! It feels like you let us think Velvet was still mostly in control of herself when it turns out that this was how Velvet felt. Yes, she maintained in her mind to be little bits of who she had been, but she is only in control of what Colette wants her to have so she has had to consciously concede that last little bit. I love how you've done this!
  14. Surprise! What a revelation! An epiphany. Just those words, forgotten and then found! You did steal that from me, you know... But what an amazing twist in this story! And fun that this began with an insightful comment from one of the other girls. Aside from that, Keira is definitely going to be a challenge but my guess is that Velvet will find it within herself to deal with this. Can't wait to see how!
  15. She really has changed! She is even surprising Collette. Now we've got a bit of drama as we wait to see about this new girl Keira.
  16. Agreed, I'm struck by what I see as a big difference in Velvet just from the previous chapter and it doesn't seem like a ploy. She doesn't understand the changes in the institution or in what has happened to her which is natural, but her anger has eased and she seems to want to find her place rather than fight it. I guess there was reference to that happening but the seemingly sudden shift surprises me.
  17. Velvet seems to be childlike in some ways, still with some old characteristics in her thinking but then not. She is certainly quite a way from a finished product. I wonder if she can still access her library, but from what we've already seen the books won't be the same.
  18. I was right... Phase Zero. Let's see how she handles it. It'll be a ride, that's for sure!
  19. There was another one but I can't find it now. And WOW!! I didn't see this coming!! Now I'm wondering what will happen with Velvet! They certainly have to take drastic action... I'm going to guess on the basis of your earlier stories to which this is a prequel, but will keep those thoughts to myself for those who haven't read them. Both for Marlow and Velvet. For now though, the integrity of the entire program seems at great risk.
  20. Dollars to diapers, Colette, for whatever reason, isn't aware of this special bath... Let's hope there are no devastating side effects. But it is totally experimental and untried. oops... this right at the end of the chapter.
  21. Gosh... I bet you changed the title of the chapter and rewrote it too! That's OK... a special bath sounds... well, special! waiting patiently... waiting patiently... waiting patiently...
  22. I agree to a great extent with both littleTomás and Wannatripbaby. Velvet seems to be under the illusion that she will somehow get through a full year with her former self intact and leave Mt. Calibeen largely unchanged. That cannot and will not happen. I don't think she'll lose all her abilities, but this facility can't afford to let things go as they are now. Either Colette or Marlowe will eventually crack through Velvet's defenses or something will happen to force her to reevaluate what winning and losing might look like to her. I wonder if the next chapter won't be titled "Her Failure".
  23. Yes, I agree w Wannatrip. I think things are not going to go as Velvet had hoped. Even as I read this, I wondered what the woman meant by "a hearing of the sort." It does now seem that it was a probe of Velvet in order to evaluate the next step for her. Originally I'd seen the plot going to Velvet 'fixing' Annie and the program benefitting through the process Velvet would use, but then Velvet's defenses being defeated and her slipping into the program fully. Having read several of the stories following in the time sequence of the facility, I recognize that the program develops a great deal and so guessing how it gets there is an interesting game!
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