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Marnie really is pushing things, but wow! It's working! I kind of doubt that this will be the end of the challenges, I hope she has a good sense of how far to go and when to stop. I worry a little bit about what might happen if she goes past a certain point.
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It's so nice that Marnie seems to have wisdom about both Kylie and Ellie, can deal with them in the way they need at any particular moment and can help them see how they can best relate to each other. She has her needs as well and is skillful about drawing out each of her Little girls to see where her relationship is to each of them separately. Then of course there's the darn triangle of the three of them together. I suspect we'll be seeing some rough spots, but I also suspect things will probably work out for the three of them... but then again, I often 'suspect' situations that deep down I want to see happen.
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OK, thanks! Often in reading stories here my imagination gets away from the actual story line. Now it makes sense! And now with this chapter I'm all warm and mushy. For Kylie, her relaxed state of part exhaustion, part relaxation allowed her to let her feelings out and also ****The Kiss****! I realize it's possible she'll regret the kiss and her openness with Ellie in the morning when she's rested and wide awake. But saying that also leaves the chance of a true breakthrough for the two baby sisters. I'm pulling for a closer relationship for the two of them, whether it's a relationship of two baby sisters that exists only in the Little zone or whether they can loosen the definition they've given it in order to make ****The Kiss**** work.
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Interesting chapter. I'm not sure I understand why Kylie was acting weird about using her diaper after seemingly being deep in Little mode over the toys. I imagine it may become more clear at some point. Meanwhile I'm just enjoying the read.
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I love the interchange between the two Little girls! Each of them helped the other in various ways being more comfortable.
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Sibling rivalry! Fun, but this isn't moving the relationship between Ellie and Kylie forward.
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Great idea! haha... and a bet, a dress, and a play date, oh my!
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So cool that Noland was so cool about Ellie. He seems to have a decent understanding of gender and I think his statement about subtle changes dat to day is pretty insightful for a cis guy. As for the talk about Ellie and Kylie is interesting and frustrating. Ellie would love a relationship but Kylie is still afraid of a relationship even though its obvious she wants one. I think Noland's suggestion of the ball is in Kylie's court is a bad idea. I think Kylie needs to be helped to see that Ellie wants a relationship that will only improve on the friendship they have now. And now I've got to wait to see how right ...or wrong... I am.
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What a cute ending to the chapter! Both baby girls are trying to be different; be better. Kylie likes the idea of kissing but is afraid of what might happen so that piece doesn't change yet. I wonder how long it will be. Ellie likes her too much to push it. But, I wonder...
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And the cuteness just continues!
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Now there's a perfect little girl! I know she's not going to be very happy about wetting, but she's starting to buy into Mommy rules. I'm sure it will take time, but this is progress.
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I love how you have Ellie concerned that she's not just like her big sister rather than simply her own Little self, as I'd guess true younger sister might feel. I'm sad though that Kylie is worried that she isn't being a proper older sister. I guess I feel Ellie's concerns are cute and more 'natural' while Kylie 'should' have more confidence. Both seem to be concerned I think because their relationship is getting more personal. Maybe it feels more comfortable for Ellie because in spite of her newly discovered feelings about her gender, her sexuality hasn't changed. On the other hand it seems Kylie's Little self can see Ellie as her Little sister but she still sees the adult El as a male, in conflict with her sense of sexuality, and there is still her paranoia about losing the relationship she has had with El. You've shown Ellie also wondering whether her confusion is trying to do "Little" right or try to do her gender right - both of which should not be concerns but she has to decide that on her own. The intersection of all levels of the concerns each is feeling makes for wonderful tension and leaves me as a reader worried for them. And regardless how they work out their different layers of relationship, I don't want to see either of them hurt. I haven't had quite as much concern for Marnie, but we now see she has some things to work out in being a Mommy as well and that leaves me hoping that she can remain happy as well.
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What YourFNF said! And even though neither of them have things figured out in any rational sense, they kissed again. I love that Kylie wasn't even sure who kissed who!
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I disagree with this thought, but then I should talk to Noland and El(lie) about it. It's the characters not the authors saying this. Regardless, Noland is not just a great friend but incredibly insightful and helpful. Probably just as well that El(lie) didn't go into the whole Little issue, let alone toss in the diapers! And yet all of this is tangled up and has made things very complicated. Then, toss in what is clearly a confused mutual attraction... But Noland has hopefully set the stage for El(lie) to start looking at things with a little more clarity! Gotta say, I'm absolutely loving this story!
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Thank you! And not even halfway through this story! OMG!! not even halfway through! I don't know if I can take it!! I can't stop reading, trying to catch up and see more of the development. Both Kylie and Ellie have been so very confused! Yes, YourFNF said it - amazing character work! El's confusion and uncertainty is so very realistic! What they will decide as to their identity is still way up in the air but mixed with El's feelings for Kylie and Kylie's feelings for... hmmm, is it El or Ellie... or does it matter? Kylie's emotions from her past mixing with fears for her future are so realistic! I'm kind of close to someone who is plagued in her relationships by her assumptions of what other people think and feel. Very close. So close it's like I am her... It isn't the same as what Kylie is putting herself through but it isn't all that different in that she's making assumptions about El and the future. And you're dealing with it sooooo realistically and so well!
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I've been somewhere else - just not here - for some time. I'm back now and slowly catching up. Normally I won't comment until I do get caught up, but I just had to! I think Chapter Twenty-Five is about my all time fav of your writing. You've caught me at least a couple times trying to see a character as trans and taking that away from you, the author. I've learned to read, sit back and let your characters develop themselves within the story. What I love the most about this chapter and the story as a whole (so far - up through Ch 25) stems from El being someone who early on I would have pegged as trans. Right now, I have no idea exactly how El identifies or will, both in gender and in Little Space. And most of all, I feel you've done a magnificent job in capturing the uncertainty, questioning, happiness yet lack of consistency in knowing one's self that so many of us go through to one extent or another. It isn't a perfect fit to me - which I've tried to force in other stories - but rather you've made El that person comfortable with a mix of male and female feelings as well as a mix of adult and little thoughts and yet not quite ready to reconcile it all in their own heart and mind. To a small extent my excitement in reading this chapter comes a tiny bit from personal growth on my part (as El experiences their own) and being comfortable enough in my own skin to allow others the necessary struggle to find their own comfort in the identity they will, I hope, settle on.
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Interesting start to this story. I had to read the first two chapters over to get a sense of who is who but I'm seeing why once I did reread. Kylie is a bit of a puzzling/complex character at this point and while we already see her little side, I'm eager to find out why she is trying to stay so aloof. I also want to see exactly who Eliot is; how he identifies and how he's going to with that and his feelings for Kylie. So far, this seems like a very good one as your anniversary story.
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I seem to feel that way after every Sophie and Pudding story! In my mind, I don't want the story to end because S&P have developed the characters so well, I hate to let them slip away. There will be no more cutting in Maisie's future (I don't think) and though she'll have some of the ups and downs we all have, she has embraced the pretty much unconditional love of her family and friends - especially Cora.
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So, Cora just 'happened' to be randomly standing behind that tree. What a strange coincidence! Anyway, I like how even though she is acclimating to Lillikol, she stood up for her own feelings and told Lyon to take a hike.
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I love having Lew in the story. Not a major character, but he plays off Lyon well and helps point out Lyon's ego and arrogance (though I think the ego and arrogance is to cover his self consciousness). I think it's a nice touch that Maisie has gotten used to the diapers and being changed but NOT checked by Lyon.
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I love the way Kodi gave Maisie such important perspective.
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I kind of chuckled with this line. It showed that Sugar was going to win... which in the long run clearly shows that Maisie will win as well. This chapter had the effect I'd mentioned about maybe being better to have had Maisie in High Reg from the start, but in a much better way. Which shows I should never try to write your stories... I know that, but this story really has brought out emotions and has caused strong reactions. Now things are in a much better place. Not a place many of us can be familiar with or truly understand, but it is clear that Maisie is going to be receiving what she has needed for so long.
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Thanks for adding this section. It helps quite a bit. I wish there was a convenient way for you to slip explanations into your stories when situations and actions are (far) out of the ordinary such as Lillikol. I know that this is not only impractical, but would get in the way of and in some cases destroy plot development. So my 'wish' is purely wishful thinking. Now after reading your explanation above, I began thinking Maisie would have been better off to be put not only into High Reg but punishment pants until she got acclimated to using her diaper. And maybe there's another powder that would help her actually make her at least functionally incontinent. Oh, how she'd rebel! But maybe it would be concentrated and done. In this chapter she seems to be giving in somewhat. She did NOT want to go to ballet, but went and participated without fuss - though I'm sure the threat of Bright Powder hung heavily in her mind. Of course, my thinking was creating an alternate story line and I'm perfectly happy to stick with yours. I certainly don't know how the story will end or what twists have been built in. For now I'm fine waiting to see how Maisie reacts at home and/or tomorrow in school.
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Sophie, thanks for making the comments you did above. We're all coming from different places and so have different perspectives. It's helpful that you talk a little about your perspective for the story. I think at least a certain amount of what you are considering criticism is the emotions of the readers coming out as comments. I imagine we each pick up on different aspects of the story which then colors what we think of what's happening in the story - not the conception of the story, certainly not how it is written, and definitely not of you. I hope that my comments haven't been hurtful; I'd feel very bad if they were taken to be and I apologize for anything I've said that was at all hurtful. I'm reading mostly from Maisie's point of view I guess, though I don't have a good grasp or understanding of what she's been through. All of this, basically to agree with WBD. Your writing is excellent and because of the character and plot development, you are reaching into each of us and stirring us up. This story is causing many of us to think more deeply than most other writers here are capable of eliciting. And just sayin', I seem to remember a fair amount of negative comments about Mt. Calibeen. A difference I sense is that criticisms of that were flat and rather unemotional, while here you've touched us in the feels and we're responding from our emotions. I don't like Lillikol, I don't like Sugar and I don't particularly like the way Mace is handling the discovery of the scars and Sugar's take on it. That's because you've stirred something in me. I think that's a good thing and a sign of excellent writing. I'm not about to stop reading your writing because for the most part, it continues to challenge me.
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How is that mobile so hypnotic? And this is NOT what I wanted out of the discovery of the scars! **I know... if I don't like the way things happen here, I should write my own story...** But still, this chapter is just making me dislike Sugar all the more and I'm losing respect for Mace. I really wish Mace and Sugar had talked more about how this was going to work out. Mace is the more reasonable of the two and he should have stood up at least a little stronger to Sugar's 'solution' to the situation! Me not liking this chapter is a sign of me liking the story but I could like the story all the more if I could've liked this chapter more! ***whine, whine, whine...