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Interesting twist and I wonder what the next will be.
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The developing romance is awesome to see and I like how John is grieving but growing into his life as a Little.
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I like small or long chapters better than no chapter. Poor John feeling overwhelmed but he still get there.
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Regime changes are always nerve wracking times, should be an interesting transition period!
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Great chapter! I love how John makes his suggestion and the adults actually listen. The respect most of the Amazons show John is refreshing in this story. But I love the dimension either way. The perspective John draws with is awesome but so is your perspective on the dimension in this story. Love it!!!
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Lots happening in that chapter and yet I can’t wait to see more!
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Love the Derpy name! Someone certainly has a new favorite stuffy. Great chapter!
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I am certainly intrigued! The etiquette school will be fun and I imagine hypnosis is used to an extent. Looking forward to where you take this story!
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If only they knew what or who was coming for them…of course if only we and the rescue team knew what lay ahead…lol!
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Very cute and wholesome. I look forward to the chapter with the two dogs. I wonder if Xerxes gets a bit jealous or over protective especially if John gets nervous.
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Are there some semi-good etiquette schools or just evil evil ones? This will be interesting and I am so so so looking forward to it! Great new chapter by the way. I loved the explanation and am glad she was as calm as she could be with the news!
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This was a fun intro on multiple levels! Looking forward to more and congrats on school!
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Lovely little addition to the story. Very sweet chapter and I am excited to see Mike again!
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Agreed the tension and anticipation is awesome!
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I like the spurt of energy like any kid gets or person rather. Amanda knew him we.l enough to get a warm shower and like any parent used it as a time to multitask so to speak regarding John and his hair situation. I wonder if the Therapist will be there when John wakes up or how it affects his sleep that evening?
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I always love the Hellcats!
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Love the Littles Extraxt. I think mom will keep a close eye on his intake of that!
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Very cute chapter! He is so shy and that just adds to everything!
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I love how defensive of his Momma John was…so very cute. Nana certainly knew what she was doing and I don’t even think Amanda realized what the chocolate was or would do. The comment of “learn quickly” makes more sense. Loved it overall!
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The consequences will certainly be interesting to watch. Great chapter and loved all the stealth stuff!
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Yeah Update!! Love the explanations and references of Baloo and Fozzy. I laughed along with the Littles. Very cute. I am curious as to how the interactions with other Bigs go. Great Job!!
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Love this!!
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Love the idea to sort of level the playing field.
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Very interesting and good so far!
Dimension of Destiny - Chapter 20: Fallout (24/05/17) Final
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Interesting end to part 1. Definitely makes one want to keep reading!!