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I wonder if Addy's mother isn't reinforcing her threats so her daughters will continue to "tow the line" by turning the nanites on and off with little gifts like bed wetting, random daytime accidents, thumb sucking, loss of body hair, etc. On the other hand, what's the long-term viability of nanites? Wouldn't the kidneys flush them out or perhaps the liver break them down? Or perhaps they reproduce....
It's a wonderful story!!!
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On 3/21/2021 at 8:56 PM, BabySofia said:
Almost worth going to law school, huh?
I thought about it myself for patent law. Truth is, my sister never made much money since she didn't chase ambulances
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Darn, Guess I can't call you BabySophia Esq.
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Cliff hangers are such a great literary tool!? I suspect that you have a very close association with the law, you write like my older sister who's a retired attorney (family court and HR)
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I'm enjoying your story a lot; I hope Tom and Jo continue their games long after Tom gets out of his casts.
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Wonderful Story, I wonder how common a fantasy this is?
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I expected the rejection; I had wondered how they could even consummate their relationship with such a difference in size. I suspect Addy will rebel slightly and offer to adopt Cameron under modified conditions sort of like Meg and Megan. Who Knows, keep up the good work!
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Sally, I always enjoy Your stories, I also worry about your well being when you drops out of sight, especially in these Covid times. I hope you're OK down under!
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A nice fun cautionary tale. Well done?
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Excellent bit of humiliation; and choices that must be made
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Magnificent! I teared up at one point
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Definitely a story worth saving! Thank you for a well written and interesting story!!!
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Cliffhanger, wow.
My guess is Ivy will get too involved and "they" will either ship both Holly and Ivy off for 'retraining' or someone with a brain will make a deal to get rid them perhaps by shrinking Ivy and send them both back to our dimension.
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Good luck to you. If and when you are ready to write again, there will always be a receptive audience here. These are troubling times. Stay safe, healthy and sane.
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Talk about a dysfunctional family/society. We're more subtle now with "Means" testing.
BTW I anxiously await tonight's installment with baited breath
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Curious if you or a family member was a Coastie, not too many people mention the Coast Guard in a story. Nice to see!
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my strikes were up!
HURRAY!
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I hope that Ivy recognizes Holly's skills should not be wasted and they will come to a "wet" accomodation. Perhaps they'll start a medical team, sort of like Cuban doctors. in the little countries
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I wonder if we have a future mommy-domme or will our heroine become a LG so she and Georgie can have a play date. Either could be fun; thank you for the chapter
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Love the chapter! As much as I want MORE, don't burn yourself out, Quality not quantity ?
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BTW, thanks for the great story! I discovered your earlier work: "Diamond Tours", which I'd somehow missed. An enjoyable evening since I can't work (the movie theater I ran is shut down thanks to this wonderful virus)
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someday it would be really fun to have a short story about the "Naomi and Oliver" videos. Maybe the folks over at warpmymind.com might like to create a session for us to download and enjoy
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Maybe this is a little weird but Barry might get more traction with Geoffrey if he were diapered himself for bedwetting; besides he'd probably get more attention from his wife.
The Earth Dimension: Chapter Thirteen
in Story and Art Forum
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I hope things are settling down for you. This has been one of my favorite stories.