[What Kills A Story For You?]

Eliminated the only one I don't agree with, but this is a great list right here.

Thanks. For the one you eliminated, I should have made it clear that was personal preference. I don't think there's anything wrong with gay or furry stories, they're just not my cup of tea.

[What Kills A Story For You?]

Stories that start with an information dump.

Stories where it's always obvious what's going to happen next. I don't mind cliche done well, but even an uber-cliched story should have a couple unexpected twists to keep things lively.

Plots that revolve around diapers and using them. I prefer it when diapers are part of a broader plot that includes non-ABDL elements.

Grammar that's bad enough to make the story incomprehensible or ruin its flow.

Prepubescent boys who are forced back into diapers and end up liking them.

Gay/sissy/furry anything.

Baby-talk.

[The Brat In The Hat - Part 10 Posted 10/01]

You've built up the tension nicely. One gets the sense that Sarah and Melody's relationship is more complex than it may seem-- maybe Melody has a reason to dislike Sarah stemming from when Sarah babysat her. Looking forward to more.

[Phone Conversation]

I've just started reading this, but I'm enjoying it very much so far. I like the intergenerational nature of the story. It's like the diaper-lit version of A Hundred Years of Solitude, except unlike 100 Years this is actually enjoyable to read.