Mazamune

Hey, I don't know how I forgot to comment about it but HOW DARE YOU! 😄 Leaving us hanging like that at the end of chapter 46. How could Amy persuade her to do that ? An other quick question I have after reading the whole story again : what's the timeline between Joyce's parents visite and the last chapters ? I tried to do with the indications you left and the description of the weather but I'm a bit lost. Cheers !

Wow, okay... Horthensia seems to be sinking and fast. I hope Jenny will be able to find why and how to help her. I fear for Jenny's capacity to wistand the pressure if even the neighbors start to have despicable attitudes like in this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Cheers !

Hey there. Thank you for this new chapter and the one before. Sorry for not commenting sooner as life pulled me away from the forum for a couple of weeks. The big reveals were well brought and it's good to have explanations for a some mysteries around Jenny and Horthensia. Sadly knowing things don't always make them better and recovery will be long. You sure know how to keep us on our toes with an other cliff hanger. Good luck with your construction, I know how this kind of project could be. With hope to read more when you can. Cheers !

Hey there !!! You can't even start to imagine how happy I was to see the topic was updated a few days ago (considering I'm dumb enough to miss some chapters even by checking every couple months, I was left with Joyce finding about Sheila). Reading about Emily and Joyce is always a treat and the last developments promise some fun moments with them learning to open about their interests with others. I've finished reading this morning and I'm still excited about it ! Thanks again for sharing ! Cheers!!

The mystery keeps deepening. We have now officially reach the Marianne's trench bottom of plot. The cliffhanger is excruciating. Hope to read more soon !! Cheers!

Wow...okay. You gave us some dark chapters before but this one is brutal in more than one way. Your writing convey all the emotions of the different characters and the challenges of the situation awesomely. Hopefully with all in the open things could slowly start to go better ? (Slowly being a key word here) Anyway thousand thanks again. Cheers !

Hey there. Just with this chapter I think my emotions had their share of roller coaster for a while ... amusement parks won't see me for a long time. So much progress in the plot too. Can I try and guess that we now know where Hortensia's father is ? And may I start to brag about my previous guess for Jenny's molester or is it too soon ? (I really shouldn't it was 1/2 chance) I haven't been this eager to know what's next in this story before. Thank you for your amazing work again. Cheers!

Horthensia situation keeps being concerning both for her mental and physical health and it's not long before she's send away. The last last part between Jenny and Mathilda is really heartwarming, I like that, we haven't seen that for a long time

Hey there, Last chapter was a nice breath from all the turmoils from the summer. It's good for Jenny. Can't wait to see what's next. Cheers!

That's part of the reason it's so good.

Hey there, The story is super enjoyable as always and it's true that questions start to pile up about some characters. I'm really not sure if I want answers or the story to continue for ever... YES! I know: both. Both is good. 😉 Thanks again, Cheers.

Adam go strait into action ! Quite intense for a first meeting. Can't wait to see what goes next. Thanks for sharing this story here. Cheers!

Hey there, Nice begining for this story and if it has Sophia approuval I’m sure it will be great. Can’t wait to read more. Cheers!

Hey there. I didn't find the place where it's said that it's Horthensia father who hurt Jenny. I think it's the same man all the way (killing children and abusing Jenny and Horthensia). Now he want Jenny away so she could not testify and have Thens back. The story is sure quite hard in the last chapters but I'm sure we will be reward with soft tenderness soon. Thanks for your writing. Cheers!

Totally agree. How could you find something even more mind-blowing each time ? The plot keep thickening at the same time : one ghost or two, the man at Jenny house, Horthensia and Cynthia, Jenny past. I Can't wait even more than usual to read what's next !! Thanks and Cheers!