This story is complete!   For the sake of posterity and for anyone who wants to compare, I'm leaving the 'original' version up, which was written chapter-by-chapter and posted as I got them done. To read the complete version, you can view the entire thing (for free, without an account,) on my Ream page:   https://reamstories.com/page/loqrfhtkkv/story/lpist7becw   (I'll also be distributing an ebook version eventually, but I need to set up a platform for that.)   As a reminder, I'm also still running a Kickstarter for the Audiobook adaptation! There's just five days to go, so if you want to help us hit our stretch goal and claim your copy of the book, (and help support future projects like this,) please consider donating! It's just 15$ for a copy, the same that you'd pay for an Audiobook on Audible or other major platforms.   https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/peculiarchangeling/the-baby-bet-coming-to-audio

DUMB NPCS CANNOT Answer EXTREMELY Basic Questions! (youtube.com) P.S.: This is why I'm so fond of saying "People Are Stupid And They Suck"...emphasis on stoopid

Tonight, I will be watching Pineapple Express with my parents. 

"I wike appies" he says

I am actually a bit impressed.  This chapter was only posted 4 hours ago and already has 8 likes.  That means that at least 8 different people were obviously waiting to see a new chapter of this and liked it.  In reality I shouldn’t be impressed.  The story is pretty amazing.  Amanda is going to have a bit of competition between the guys fighting for her favors. Right now I don’t think she even realizes that Agent Praefectus is interested in her.  I have a feeling that is going to change.   John is still adorable and not even trying.  In fact he’s trying not to be.  Like several others I am loving the story and can’t wait to see more.