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I noticed it, but it was so obvious to me I didn't think to comment on it 😂. But I did laugh and think he'll be surprised to learn that Ian has a strict mommy that keeps him away from booze 😂
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Akiza started to the car and began the drive home having no idea that Andrew was wearing pull ups or was wet at the moment. After about 20 minutes Akiza pulled up to the house and turned the car off “We’re here Andrew let’s get you inside.” Gently unbuckling the boy.
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Good catch. I put this at the very end of the scene in the hope that readers would connect it to the much earlier argument where Rita diagnoses Ian as an alcoholic, and he vehemently denies it.
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Many thanks! To give credit where credit is due, the image of Linh sitting and staring out to sea was inspired by the scene in The French Lieutenant's Woman where Meryl Streep stands at the very end of the storm swept Cobb in Lyme Regis, and stares out to sea. I wanted readers to see the girl, and not an assemblage of words.
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