Baby Johnny Posted January 21, 2009 Share Posted January 21, 2009 I enjoyed the update. I am looking forward to the next installment. Thanks! Link to comment
Antonia Posted January 22, 2009 Share Posted January 22, 2009 Well done - I thoroughly enjoyed you story line and your presentation. Thank you. Link to comment
diamondback6881 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Very nice. I like it. Please continue. Link to comment
babyjennie Posted January 26, 2009 Share Posted January 26, 2009 Dear Alice, I enjoyed the second post more than the first. You're starting to get the hang of describing your characters, but be bold! Don't be afraid to drop a descriptive phrase in every second paragraph, or so. But a couple of other points, okay? It was 9:30 at night and Emi laid on her bed reading a magazine and playing with her black locks of hair while eating strawberry flavored pocky out of a small box. As she laid on her bed facing the ceiling, Amy floated into the room and sat on the bed next to her sister, grabbing one of the snacks out of the box and popping it into her mouth. Link to comment
Alice-chan Posted January 26, 2009 Author Share Posted January 26, 2009 *Gives military salute* Yes! Thank you Madam President for your criticisms! I will strive to do my best in my future works. *Starts slacking* Dang, you call this horny material? ^^;; This is but the tip of the iceburg. The next bit of this part gets really interesting then. It'll seem a little familiar but with my own sick, demented twist to it. I just noticed, for an Angel of Hope, I can spew out some crazy stuff.... Anyways, look forward to the next part in the coming week.....I hope. The Angel of Hope, Alice Link to comment
Alice-chan Posted January 27, 2009 Author Share Posted January 27, 2009 *Puzzled look* You call this nice???? I think you're forgeting that this story is based off the real life roleplay I have with my little sister. You also forgot which of the two sister's represents me and which one represents my little sister. If you call this nice, I wanna know what you call sick. The Angel of Hope, Alice Link to comment
Alice-chan Posted January 27, 2009 Author Share Posted January 27, 2009 ....Where may I find this fan fic? The Angel of Hope, Alice Link to comment
Guest bjj Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 WOOOOOW! VERY VERY VERY GOOD! Link to comment
Alice-chan Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 Arigato gozaimasu. The next Part will be coming out soon. Look forward to it. The Angel of Hope, Alice Link to comment
Alice-chan Posted July 15, 2009 Author Share Posted July 15, 2009 Anyone rememer this old thing I wrote many moons ago? YEah, I forgot about it for a while too. DO you guys think its worth it to continue? The Angel of Hope, Alice Link to comment
diamondback6881 Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 I'll read it if you continue. Link to comment
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