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13 hours ago, ozziebee said:

*sigh* I felt a disjoint between Stacy's motivation to go over to the DD and learn the Dimension's tech far advanced than her own skills, and no sooner she get there, she's coding like an expert, hacking and cracking all sorts of different techs, stuff she's not ever imagined in her own dimension.  In the end, that disjoint really started to detract from what I thought was the original storyline. Towards the end of Year 4 I'd think she'd be capable, but not a few weeks after arriving.

I chalked some of it up to "suspension of disbelief" much like an episode of CSI, though I'd also argue there's nothing like learning under extreme conditions either, you'd be surprised what you can do/learn when your life or job depends on getting something done. In pretty much any IT field, you've got to be able to adapt and learn on your feet quickly. That being said, it seems like Stacy focused on AI programming as what she wanted to learn specifically, that's quite a bit different from hacking.  Who knows, maybe Stacy already played extensively with a copy of Kali and had a good skillset in that end already, she was established as already being good at programming after the programming placement test, anyways.

EDIT: This is an actual hacker presentation, from a pretty experienced hacker, this stuff isn't as exciting as it sounds!

 

 

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1 hour ago, WBDaddy said:

An ambitious project comes to a close.  You executed your vision on this mammoth scale.  Well done, Sofia.  

My personal take:  Your plot concepts and world-building are really strong, though I do think you got caught up in the tech toys a bit much.  That's probably more personal bias than anything else; I'm not much of a sci-fi person, and this definitely felt more sci-fi than drama.  

It was a wild and crazy ride, though.  Great job.  

As someone who has a professional programmer background, I really enjoyed the emphasis on tech toys and programming. I agree with everything else you said though!

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I have got to say I'm a long time lurker of ABDL boards, this is the best story I've read since the days where Long_Rifle was posting regularly. You've taken the Diaper Dimension universe and brought out the best parts of it.  I even made an account here just to say this!