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Posts posted by johndoe3815
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Is there a reason you didn't keep the story all under one heading? Also I noticed something that no one else picked up on, Why did Janice say she was going to change her son's diaper before he went to sleep but then failed to do so? This is a continuity error and these are the type of errors that usually bug me the most. In fact I wish people would help me out and catch ones that I might have made in my own stories.
Kyle'S Day
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I can't seem to find your other story you posted.