lonewolf

look you got spice be you lack good carter development and i feel that the story is missing something? but i wont say what it is that is your call to make! by the way it sher is good thou

great but you need more confidant's in you work k you've got talent donut go and bow it k kid,o you rook and thats all that matters so go and get em tiger!!!

LOOK I CANT SPELL DO TO THE FACT THAT I HAVE DISESA AND ADHD And fibromiagea and a week amun-system and allergens and the rein i poesied those ides because it's not ok that now one will touch this place, wen it happens every day and gust to let you all know, i was sexual abused and coined of beaten as a child and if we don't touch on this? then ant we gust letting it happen and is-int it gust ass bad, look kids your our foucher, and we need to protect them cues they cant protect them selves. and I'm 24 and not sick gust being canter-val and there was a guy how posed on a chat were 12 year old girls and boys would do any thing you wanted so i reported him and the site and saved the lives of those kids and got sum more perverts of the street and saved those kids fume the same fate i had to go thou, so if you want to jug me then go a head i donut care i will still go on fighting for what is right and for the ones how cant fight for themselves, most of the disabled have bin sex-yl abused because they are ez pry and most of the time they cant defend them selves.

well you see i cant spell but the truth is that I"m a good righter and i want to make good ones out of you guys. I'm tired of the same mistakes and the same ides, so i posited new ones. Cuss I'm going to make mad righter's out of you all, ones how gust cant stop righting story's that don't make a many mistakes as before this you are dewing go so fair, and it would be cool is she stead that whey. P.S then that hole part wasn't needed?

When the tubes were disconnected, they wanted her to get up. Riley looked at the child-sized walker at the side of her bed. A nurse held her like a little toddler. She put Riley's hands on the grips and helped her try to shuffle down the hallway outside her room. She left a little trail of yellow urine behind her on the floor. That was the worst thing when Riley started to remember. She resented being treated like a baby. Everyone had to help her with everything, even going to the bathroom. There was nothing wrong with her body; her brain just didn't make the connection any more. Her hand, arm, and legs wouldn't do what she wanted them to do. then you talk about this and were was it when she was walking At first when the catheter came out, everyone was so happy that and they don't leek!!! unless they aren't cleaned properly so thats were you also messed up, but it's still is a good story keep it up. lonewolf

I like it but you mest-up, you never clean up the floor were she peed and that cud leed to an accident!!! someone could get heart and or fired for that. one thing you should cu-sider? is the fact that she should go home soon, It would mack it more interesting. and it would be cool, if she also had to yous a car seat and a wheelchair? gust a thought keep up the good work!!! lonewolf o p.s us a bib or a clothing protector

ok boys and girls its time to have fun now hers to days assignment's the first one, 1: Is about a 8 year old girl named ? how gets hit by a car, the driver of the car dies and the girl is left alive but is in a coma, and 4 mounts latter she awakes to finds that, she has to relearn every thing over a-gen her parents are there to help her and so is her older sister and brother are there to help to. story 2: at 13 she witnesses the murder of her family, she is the only one to survive. then her has a stroke and here mined reverts back to when she was ital and cant do any thing for herself (she is 4foot1 and skinny), the cops partner (steven sigal) tacks her and they go into hiding but he thinks that it is an inside job and they go to a different safe plays the one thing is before this happened the girl already had a very bad case of ruminated arthritis, prier to the mind-set. nuber3: a boy age 7 is kidnapped and forest to be a baby girl so he wouldn't be fond all story's must be finished be for posting good luck