Hi, I'm new to writing and would like to improve. Please let me know any mistakes I made or if you have any suggestions. Thanks! The story contains depictions of mental illness, self harm, eating disorders, and suicide. Completely understand if you are not interested. Chapter One. “And a little’s hot chocolate too. My little sweetie loves her hot chocolate. Isn’t that right”. The woman glances down at a little too ashamed to meet her gaze.  “Five thirty five ma'am.” I