At The Wrong Place and At The Wrong Time: (still chapter 13 for now)

[Jayme]

Maybe Alice and Tohoru have more in common than is being shown at first?

[treasuresman]

I love the skin to skin contact and since she is a heavy sleeper lets hope she gets thirsty during the night and takes a snack lol 

Thanks for the awesome story look forward to the next chapter 

[CDfm]

For a simple transition chapter I thought it was great. I loved how Alice came to her senses in the tub with Tohru. I expected the initial reaction and I was glad you allowed her to actually recall the entire bath thing. I also liked how the two bonded a bit while falling asleep. I can see where Alice could fall for Tohru as much more of a mother figure for her. One little thing I noticed was that it wasn’t a trio that headed off to school, but actually a foursome. I was very happy I could give this a like and I am really looking forward to reading more. 

[crono]

Just wanted to share a picture that I commissioned and helped with. It involves three of the little's from the story. On the left is Jessie, in the middle is the main character, Alice, and on the right, is Aura. I'm still working on the next chapter, let me know what you all think!

 

[Sarah Penguin]

cute piccy

[Guilyn]

That's amazing...

Can't wait to see if poor Alice is going to also be spending a life in diapers as well or if it's just her friends.

[CDfm]

I love the picture 

[HotChoc]

Decided to make an account after reading through the entirety of this story (got the link from your DA post). I gotta say, this is my favorite (or at least second favorite) longform regression story. Normally I tend to hate longform stories, esp ones in the Diaper Dimension setting, they're usually pretty poorly written and I'm not exactly wanting something with a bunch of chapters when I'm just looking for something to masturbate to, but damn is this story really enjoyable.

I really like the left-field martial arts subplot, and the relationship between Alice and Tohru is really great, it's rare to see a mental regression story like this where the core relationship is based on mutual trust and respect and respecting each other's boundaries.

I like the juxtaposition between the 3 characters, Jesse is treated like property, a slave to the whims of her caretaker and captor, where even her thoughts and memories are subject to control, which is normally the setup for this kind of story. Aura is treated more like a person, but still ultimately treated like a child without agency by Amber, Aura's wants and desires only slightly considered over Amber's intentions for her "daughter", and Alice and Tohru's relationship is something else entirely, something I've never seen in a fic like this, true equals who grow to love and respect each other and their agency despite the power difference, and the healthy, intimate relationship that comes out of that. It's absolutely fantastic.

If I had any wishes for this story, it'd be that Alice chooses to remain in the dimension, but doesn't necessarily decide to become a 24/7 baby, her agency and free will still being respected by Tohru even when Alice fully embraces that child/caretaker relationship happily, and I'd love to see it if the other 2 caretakers, Amber and especially Serena, actually begin to appreciate and even envy the kind of deep bond Alice and Tohru develop, and make the decision to stop treating their littles like playthings or property and more like the people they are, and the littles still deciding they like being babies for their mommies without that kind of coercion they were previously subjected to. A story that started as the standard "trapped in another dimension and forcibly regressed against my will" slowly turning into a story where everyone loves and respects each other completely and healthily in spite of a world that tells the amazons to objectify littles and disregard their agency would be a fantastic subversion to the genre.

Anyways, tl;dr great story, can't wait to see more, keep it up.

[starman]

This story is brilliant , well written ,just one thing which is annoying ,this has not been updated since June 2019 please do not let it die .

[crono]

Just an update.  I'm still working on it, just going through some writers block.  Thank you all, for being patient!

[kasarberang]

15 minutes ago, crono said:

Just an update.  I'm still working on it, just going through some writers block.  Thank you all, for being patient!

Totally understood! Keep up the good work.

[treasuresman]

I hope you are doing well and have overcome the writers block as i really love your story and can not wait for you to share some more with us 

[Panther Cub]

Please update soon!

[crono]

Thanks for all your patience.  Should have a new chapter by sunday!

 

[Panther Cub]

1 hour ago, crono said:

Thanks for all your patience.  Should have a new chapter by sunday!

 

YAY!

[Cya]

19 hours ago, crono said:

Thanks for all your patience.  Should have a new chapter by sunday!

 

Finally, some good news! They passed some disgusting new law against Pokemon Go that's going to kill the game. Needless to say, I'm very depressed. Anyway, can't wait for another chapter!

[Panther Cub]

Hey there, Crono! Can't wait for the next chapter! ?

[flauschig]

Take your time. I appreciate your work and looking forward to read a new chapter.

[crono]

Sorry again for the long wait. I had to take some time off due to financial issues in real life and taking care of my parents.  So I was pretty burnt out in writing back in june. Hopefully I can get motivated to continue, thanks again for everyone in the comments, it helps!

[Sky Hooves]

45 minutes ago, crono said:

Sorry again for the long wait. I had to take some time off due to financial issues in real life and taking care of my parents.  So I was pretty burnt out in writing back in june. Hopefully I can get motivated to continue, thanks again for everyone in the comments, it helps!

It's no problem. Real life comes always first.

[Cya]

I've been silently waiting your return. Take the time to regain your creativity. 

[Panther Cub]

Hugs! We're just glad to hear from you! Please don't worry about the long pause in between writing!

[treasuresman]

Hey @crono hope things are improving and you can write some more of your awesome story soon 

[babyboy1500]

I Hope everything is going good for you cant wait for the next chapter

[Tableleg0]

This is a really good story! Can’t wait for part 15!!!