Would absolutely love some feedback?

[Gothicruby]

Hey guys; I'd really, really appreciate some feedback on some things I've written of late.

I've been trying something a little experimental with the style, the narrative being slightly 'fragmented' specifically and I'd just like to get thoughts and opinions? Depending on what's permitted I could like to the stories here or over on my a03? 

[Elbs]

I'd suggest just posting them here or on AO3 with a note saying that you welcome constructive criticism.

[Gothicruby]

4 minutes ago, Elbs said:

I'd suggest just posting them here or on AO3 with a note saying that you welcome constructive criticism.

Already done; it's kind of coming up dry...I thought maybe I had to officially ask for some critique? Or, at the least, it wouldn't hurt to try?